Open Poetry #20 |
Hot Cup Of My Morning |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hot Cup Of My Morning ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~ ~ ~ You dip words into the hot cup of my morning they steep until I am tepid with the brew Inhale brings me to anticipation's sip as I savor the aroma of you A stir of sweet rhyme morning sublime~ Inspired by the writing of Dark Stranger~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Aha, his words are like donuts? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Lovely, lovely. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ What an inspiration..... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
You know now I have this craving for coffee *drools* ohh anyways, I really liked it..hehe I really don't know whatelse to say but I need my caffiene fix now!!:p Kristen |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yes, I agree...he does inspire a hot sip of something. Hugs! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
to wrap your hands around the warmth so gently do you lift that moment's pause is heavenly before it reaches your lips... Delightful thoughts this morning, Marge! *s* Indigo |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ I read his poem after I first read this one and now I can see where you're coming from he certainly does have a way of tickling the creative senses with his poetic lines. Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: It better be coffee! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Noooppers..it better be raspberry tea teehee |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nothing like a hot cup of coffee or tea and some poetry and a few kisses...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Marge; I just dumped my grande in my lap reading this one....glad it was from this morning...and was cold..lol You are too sweet, and I loved what you did to this..Thank you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
perfect Marge, have felt this way many a morning, in the past especially... hugs M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
better than coffee! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ I just ordered 3 dozen~ Seymour~ Thanks sweetheart~ GreenEyes~ Yeppers ... he is that~ Kristen~ Thanks for the read and reply~ Martie~ LOL ... that's a fact~ Indigo~ Oh ... I LOVE your poetic reply. Thank you~ SmittenKitten~ Glad you checked out Dark Stranger's writing~ Thanks gal~ BettyLou~ Tee-Hee ... it's a three-cupper morning~ JanetMarie~ That too ! JamesMichael~ Well you just sweetened the pot with those *kisses*~ DarkStranger~ *giggling* at the thought of 'El Cuppa Grande'~ Thank you for the sweet inspire~ Wynter~ Ahhhhh ... isn't it delicious ? *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dixie~ Tee-Hee-Hee .... passing shadows is just what we were ... *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I wish my words could perk you up In ways to overflow your cup With just the right amount of cream To give your eyes a dreamy gleam A bit of sugar - not too much For I can be sweet to the touch Then, when I have you all alone We will enjoy our "mountain grown"... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMyJuanValdez~ I've told you once I'll repeat Your 'MOUNTAIN GROAN' Is twice as sweet~ Just one cup will never do I want the whole poet-pot of YOU~ *HUGS* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You dip words into the hot cup of my morning they steep until I am tepid with the brew a beautifully written shape poem, Marge... ~many morning hugs~ copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Every morning I wait In the 8 minute Que.... In the Timmie's drive thru For my Morning brew... Tripple sweet and tripple cream, To wake me from my dream, As strong as I can handle, Gotta have my morning Caffine!!!! Thank you Marge, from one lover of Dark Brew to another... This was a good Cup of Joe. Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
GORGEOUS, SHORT PIECE, MARGE!!!! Hot cup of the morning, indeed...***Ivy Rose |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yeah...he has a way of waking up Everyone...good stuff here...strong, a good Espresso...where's the latte? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lyra~ Thank you kind lady ... hope you have a BEAUTIFUL day~ MagicMystery~ Thanks so much ... I like mine 'Dark' with a little touch of 'Stranger'~ IvyRose~ Thanks for joining me in a 'poet brew'~ Karilea~ Yah ! It goes down sooooooooooooo easy~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The whole poet-pot of me?? That would be grounds for divorce!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BallaLeer~ Good to the VERY last drop !!!! LOL ... I see you're just perking right along~ Have a cup ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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