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living proof (dream challenge) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I knew this man of mirth and dust-- I knew him-- I gave him my trust. Upon the screen of lidded eye within a dream I realized... He bent before me, at my feet, washed the sand and eased the heat. He washed my feet while others gasped. He dried them with his robe as rag. I did not want this-- looked away. He smiled. He did it anyway. Implications too profound-- a bathe of leg treds holy ground... I knew I should reciprocate-- but cringed a pause of hesitate. I knew his feet wore grains of sand. A piece of earth from every land. I knew his sandals wore my miles... Ashamed, I looked. I saw him smile. And then he laughed in sheer delight... as though I were a little child. As though I had done something cute... He laughed, with love-- living proof. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ahhh, the epitome of devotion...it must be amusing to have someone washing your feet, even in your dreams...i can be cynical and wonder if you are power-hungry though..heehee  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
don't think I didn't analyze that either! But no...in my dream, my attitude was like, "uh oh".....smile....didn't want it then, and don't want it now. Thanks k! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A religious dream? As you know, I can 'read you' in those dreams. I enjoyed this one...told me a lot about you.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey lady...been looking for you! smiles...told this one to 'becca first. Ask her...I'll bet she remembers!  |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
i love it! the rhyming is perfect too! i want to do a dream challenge...what exactly do i have to write about? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you rose! smooches for that, and there is all sorts of inspiration to be found in the Poetry Challenge forum! Thanks...I'll see you in YOUR dreams? bwahahaha?  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Can I have your dreams? Mine are so boring usually that I'd have to lie to take part in this challenge. Hmm, maybe I will. Maybe I will. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
oh my, Serenity!!! What a DREAM!!!! I guess it's a really incredible feeling having someone wash your feet huh.  It would be even better if that one is a guy. :P _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hmmmm. . . wondering if I should pull out the dream dictionary for all of these. . . be interesting to see what they would suggest. . . hey, you know that I love this one. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh Karen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, it is always those simple smiles and laughs and hugs that make dreams living proof to us all and how we are convinced they are more than just a movie in our minds! (kiss on cheek) Wow, I want to try this challenge too, it sounds like so much fun, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sometimes? I have wonderful dreams...other times? Well, smile, it's kinda unpredictable in there... thanks for reading, and I do wish you all would try this... |
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