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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
"What IS it," said the soul, "That without form, I'm not whole? Though will o' the wisp is what be I And often cast but by a sigh For where thy dreamer oft-times is As dream he, but soft, often ‘tis The ways that be, held by thy eye, But for my wayward soul go I." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lady darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful. This flows with the smoothness of water. It is flowing over my soul in a torrent of wonder. Beautiful writing darling heart utterly utterly beautiful. You really do paint with magic you know You do know I absolutely love this don’t you? Of course you do. As always darling girl this is utterly utterly perfect    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Wow, I love the spiritual feel of this, sweet friend, your words are always filled with pure wisdom and insight to the soul with your classic cadence and sincerity of your voice! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Melodie Morningstarr Junior Member
since 2002-05-09
Posts 16Toronto, ON, Canada |
Very well said! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
As cold and clean as a mountain cataract. And refreshing. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Perfect!!... |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
methinksthe soul in defintion always seeks the more in light of seeing casting off shadows fear to remember only what pierces the breath of the heart the soul so attached Nicely done EH |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Lady Hi there, this is really beautiful writing and touches me in my soul of thought. I like this a lot   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I feel there is a soul somewhere smiling, as I read this out loud  We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lady, Tis a mysterious write thee pen 'pon the mome' of soul does fly and from thy most whimsome whim thy soul shant not surely die. Enjoyed the write, Thank You! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
"What IS it," said the soul, "That without form, I'm not whole? I love the way you phrased this age old question, Lady... Well done!  ~soulful hugsLyra |
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andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
Lady hello it’s Emma here the youngest of Mushy’s daughters. And finally I get to play on here too, now mum will have to queue behind me This is a beautiful piece of writing I really love it. You have a great way of writing and this is super.   lots of love Emma Eternity, stands laughing at old time |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
This is very good. The rhyme scheme and the meter are even and logical, and the statement that the poem makes is very solid. I really like how you don't beat around the bush at all. There's not really much else I can say. Very good. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, LW, very striking indeed, tis is, very striking..somehow, I wish I had written this..very gentle smile |
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