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Child of Spring - Tanka
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Child of Spring - Tanka |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Rapacious giggles From a child, like robins' wings, Lifting higher still, Over daffodils in spring Greeting Sun's enlightenment  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine , As lovely as your sunshine.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, I siled just imagining cherubs running and playing duck, duck, goose in the meadows under the rainbows, this is filled with innocence and laughter, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) This is heavenly, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Tanka Karilea! Love the pics! Especially the double rainbow... which I was fortunate to see only once. ~Morning Hugs~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine..tanka's alot for this'a fina poem |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart girl how is it that you can say so much in so little, I’m awed by your ability to do so. Absolutely excellent writing I love it. One day Kari beloved I am going to say you know darling this isn’t as good as usual, of course that day will be when the grass turns pink and the sky becomes green, but still. This is utterly utterly beautiful  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very purdy, Karilea! |
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Melodie Morningstarr Junior Member
since 2002-05-09
Posts 16Toronto, ON, Canada |
Yes, this is very pretty! The pictures blend well with your tanka. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ahhh..to bring out our inner-child in the spring!! I have an extra hula hoop.....wanna play? Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
reminds me that the sun is soon. . . thank you my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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