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This Feather
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This Feather |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This Feather I release this feather To the wind and gods grace It carries the tears of my heart The ones, I can’t replace Two tears for your love Twice, cause you left in two ways One, for all the lost letters And another, for the touch you took away Good speed and fare thee well Go free with the wondering winds Please search the myriad gardens Where you’ll find a heart and love within I release this feather To the wind and gods grace It carries the tears of a heart For that day, you walked away. James Parker Haley May 9, 2002 ...and the old black rums got a hold on me ...and the old black rums got a hold on me ...will I live for another day.. Great Big Sea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Parker...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Parker~ A beautifully penned piece, enjoyed very much..well done ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) This is so sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I know how hard it must feel to say goodbye yet the way you expressed it here was very touching and I know both you and her will find true happiness out there and together you will be friends always and celebrate what you found together always! (smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Parker, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are not supposed to be tugging on hearts so early in the ayem... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What Sunshine said! This is wonderful Parker! Much enjoyed... ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I release this feather To the wind and gods grace It carries the tears of my heart The ones, I can't replace Two tears for your love Twice, cause you left in two ways One, for all the lost letters And another, for the touch you took away ========================================= Are ya trying to make me cry??? trying make me mothy mascara run? Its singe proof--not waterproof ya know  This is a cadenced kissed bittersweet beauty P-man. Its been far too long that Ive read your tender rhymes...bout time ya got yer lovely butt back in here. Im keeping this one...filing it under P ... for -- pretty blue flame |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Parker darling boy again your writing is outstandingly beautiful in its form it’s utterly utterly breathtaking in its beauty. Your heart is truly in this, I love it utterly utterly. Sometimes I swear you write with starlight, this is one of those times Perfect darling heart utterly utterly perfect. And yes I love it utterly As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nice to see you, Parker...even with this tad of sad, beautifully written. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thank you everyone for your replies. My muse has not been co-operating of late  This one just wanted to fly Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hey Park! What a nice suprise to see one of your poems here! A very sad one, I've noticed. Hope you are well, friend! Corinne |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
me thinks you fly very well sweet one... good to read you again... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sad and special. Enjoyed. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Two tears for your love Twice, cause you left in two ways One, for all the lost letters And another, for the touch you took away ======================= your muse seems not so far away my friend... this is a masterpiece....tugs at the heart strings.... take care love.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, thanks sweet poet. All is well. devina, thanks you. bsquirrel, thanks. dg, yes I've noticed that missed connections can be very good for my muse if I let them, and yes also hard on the heart strings. Parker |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I release this feather To the wind and gods grace It carries the tears of a heart For that day, you walked away Wow! I love it when your muse isn't cooperating. Beautifully done Park, my friend. love, Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dee, you snuck in there but it did not notify me... hmmmm gremlins I guess. Thank you for your reply sweet lass. Parker |
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