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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-05-08 12:54 PM



Worth Remembering

~*Marge Tindal*~

If I could reach out and
grasp this moment in my hands,
I'd hold it so tightly
that it would never escape

If ever a moment
so rare was worth remembering,
this moment with you is ...
and so, I will remember


A moment can be so fleeting
that it may never come my way again
Yet it's worth remembering ...
worth grasping and holding tightly
A moment to live on in my heart
long after the rapture of you is gone

One moment in time
One tiny feeling magnified
One chance to say,
You ... are everything to me~

Grasp it and hold it tightly~



~Sometimes, when I think I have no words left
she comes and gifts me with a thought
that explodes from my heart~

~*~

In loving memory of my mother
and to all mothers everywhere
Write your child's remember today~
Mother's Day tribute
May 2002

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
kaile
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1 posted 2002-05-08 01:06 PM


Marge,

i have felt this always...though time seems to be like a slippery eel that dodges from my reach, for most of the time, i still try to hold on...

Happy Mother's Day to you..

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2 posted 2002-05-08 01:13 PM


Margie girl my dearest sister of heart and amazing wonderful talent, this is very special. Sometimes and it’s rare a thought leaps between the eye and heart and connects with the inner self. How often you write something that is outstanding and stirs the soul. How frequently your words strike the harmonics of memory in my heart. I love this utterly utterly love it. Beautiful writing darling heart  

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-05-08 01:23 PM


mmmm
marge you did this one up nice
enjoyed it

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4 posted 2002-05-08 01:37 PM


Anything so precious is ALWAYS worth remembering...so good to read you again my special one...

hope all is under control...

Love you
~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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5 posted 2002-05-08 02:07 PM


Marge

Your remember catches me with my own...thank you.  Hugs down the driveway!

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6 posted 2002-05-08 02:15 PM


Marge~

HUGSSSSS soft and tender memories....very loving in thought.....


Lauren~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

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7 posted 2002-05-08 02:41 PM


Hi Marge,
Special moments are so precious indeed.  They can be the touchstones of much needed relief from stressful days, gladening the heart!
Joe

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-05-08 03:44 PM


Marge,
Bless you darlen.

tracie66
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9 posted 2002-05-11 03:26 AM


Margie girl this is so precious, a very special write, thankyou for sharing and I wish you a very happy mothers day as well
~HUGS~
Tracie


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (05-11-2002 03:26 AM).]

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10 posted 2002-05-11 08:13 PM


Margie girl we meet again This is a particularly fine example of your excellent writing a really beautiful poem from you and I love it Warm hugs and best wishes to you

You have an amazing ability to write the softest of thoughts well done

lots of love
Emma

Eternity, stands laughing at old time
for ages? In the grand ancestral line
Of things eternal, mounting to divine

Magnus
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11 posted 2002-05-11 09:26 PM


Marge,  any mother would be most pleased
to accept these words from a son or daughter.

Beautifully said..

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12 posted 2002-05-11 10:34 PM


What a wonderful gift. Thank you. ThisDiamond
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13 posted 2002-05-11 11:49 PM


Have I told you lately how much I have missed your writing? Sometimes I think you jump in my head and write just for me! lol
It is very good to be back, have missed it here. wonderful poem!
Email me huh?  amber

Logan
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14 posted 2002-05-12 04:11 PM


Ahh, Little Goose, those moments are what it is all about...very gentle smile
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15 posted 2002-05-13 01:53 PM


Aw so precious Marge and you excel at the tell!
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16 posted 2002-05-13 02:48 PM


Quite beautiful. I almost feel as if this is about yr home, too. Thanks for sharing.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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17 posted 2002-05-13 02:58 PM


Marge,

Yet Another insightful gem.  For you the question is no longer will you excel but rather can you maintain?

Best Regards,

INclan

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2002-05-14 09:06 PM


*Friends, I thank you all for the kindness of your touching replies~

She comes when she 'senses' I need her strength ...

BSquirrel ... you're right~
Thank you for 'sensing' me~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2006-05-12 02:34 PM




Cause Mom's are like that ... yeah, we are~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com     

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