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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-05-08 12:01 PM

(For my love Joanna...who I miss so so much while she's been busy)

I Want You So Badly
By: Noah Eaton
5/7/02

I stare up at the stars on this hot lonely night
It's been days since we've had a long talk, there's all these desires I can't fight
There's been a huge drought here, it's taken effect on my soul
Without you things feel so cold...
Things feel so cold...

Have you been thinking of me lately?
Just as I think of you everyday?

I want you so badly
You're the most beautiful angel to me
I want you so badly
I just hope that you can see
I want you so badly
Where you work day and night
Have you been thinking of me
By and by?

Opening all the windows, I try and keep me from drowning
Trying not to let this town get me down as I struggle to sleep
We used to talk all the time, now it feels we're far apart, I miss you so
Do you still love me so...
Do you still love me so...

Have you been thinking of me lately?
Just as I think of you everyday?

I want you so badly
You're the most beautiful angel to me
I want you so badly
I just hope that you can see
I want you so badly
Where you work day and night
Have you been thinking of me
By and by?

I just want to hear you tell me you love me again...
I just want to hear you tell me you love me again...

Have you been thinking of me lately?
Just as I think of you everyday?

I want you so badly
You're the most beautiful angel to me
I want you so badly
I just hope that you can see
I want you so badly
Where you work day and night
Have you been thinking of me
By and by?

Things feel so dead without you
I want you so badly...
I would give anything to have you in my arms
I want you so badly...

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-08-2002 12:02 AM).]

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2002-05-08 12:05 PM

SweetNoah~ You expressed your yearning so eloquently...it read like a song. Hugs to you

I have had nights like this.

Nicely written,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2002-05-08 12:06 PM

Hello Noah

I could almost see your heart breaking. Your words were filled with so much love and longing yet they were so sad.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-05-08 12:14 PM

I hope you hear from her soon, Noah

~sad hugs of sympathy

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (05-08-2002 12:17 AM).]

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

4 posted 2002-05-08 12:54 PM

Noah,

(hugs) I know exactly how you feel......I hope you hear from her soon.

Laura

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2002-05-08 01:29 AM

Oh Noah, the missing isn't easy I know.
Open up those windows and take comfort that we're all under the same sky!

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2002-05-08 02:47 AM

noah,

such a strong poem of longing for another.
i hope that you and joanna have a lifetime
of love and that all your dreams come true.
i know missing someone is very hard, and
being apart from them even harder. hang
on dear...i'm sure you'll hear from her
soon. take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

7 posted 2002-05-08 04:06 AM

Dear Noah~
Very well expressed passion and desire to be near the one you love, hope your wish comes true soon....well penned
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-05-08 04:51 AM

Reminding me of the Bob Dylan song..."Honey I Want You So Bad."
Hope your love and devotion pays off...James

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

9 posted 2002-05-08 10:25 AM

Awwwwwww...dear sweet Noah, take heart, I am sure she is thinking of you often. Smile!

Your friends are all here pulling for you!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-05-08 10:27 AM

Noah~

awwww as long as you have her in your heart, shes always around.....hugsssss

Lauren~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2002-05-08 10:29 AM

Noah, Do not fret dear one. She is thinking of you I am sure of it!!! This is very heartfelt and lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

12 posted 2002-05-08 10:58 AM

Ah sweet Noah,
this poem reflects your tender heart, which I hope is soon made whole again.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2002-05-08 11:02 AM

enjoyed

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