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Alan
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right next door

0 posted 2002-05-07 09:45 PM


To a friend

With words spoken in the quiet silence
As eyes question in each momentary glance
Neither of us wanting a gothic romance

Not saying things straight out
Afraid of feelings being hurt
Just wanting to do some light heart flirting

I don’t want to cause any trouble
In your life or mine
For to me you are an angel divine

You wanted to know just what I wanted
That I can’t answer just yet
But I promise to your life I am no threat

We may never be a bedroom set
But I shall love you always as a friend
The laughter and love of a friend I shall extend

But should you find yourself in my arms
Don’t expect me to regret it nor forget it
To me it would be a lot of fun and a very nice fit

So you may flirt, wink and mess with my head
But my heart you will not find anything but a friend
For it shall be locked away in a box till the very end

With in the confines of my self imposed prison
That I call home,
My ice fortress just a little north of Nome

But be warned should the chance arise
Don’t be surprised
If I take the chance to steal a little kiss

Just to know if what I have missed
Is really as the kiss I got in my dreams

alan
05/07/02


© Copyright 2002 Alan - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-05-07 11:13 PM


Unusual to find such honesty and humor.  I think sometimes the springboard for a healthy romance. Very good. ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-05-07 11:15 PM


Hi Alan!  Wonderful honest write here.
Enjoyed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-05-07 11:32 PM




(sigh) This is such a warm and upbeat sentiment to your dear friend, sweet friend, I know that your friend will be blessed by this forever and will always be blessed to have such a true friend like you! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

kaile
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4 posted 2002-05-08 01:40 PM


Alan,

interesting write..i am wondering why the author finds it necessary to restrain his emotions...

dgvarner
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5 posted 2002-05-12 12:17 PM


But should you find yourself in my arms
Don’t expect me to regret it nor forget it...

So you may flirt, wink and mess with my head
But my heart you will not find anything but a friend
For it shall be locked away in a box till the very end

With in the confines of my self imposed prison
That I call home,
My ice fortress just a little north of Nome

But be warned should the chance arise
Don’t be surprised
If I take the chance to steal a little kiss

Just to know if what I have missed
Is really as the kiss I got in my dreams
=============

oh but i love this...!!

great feeling in this one my friend..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is what happens while we're making other plans..."  ;)

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
6 posted 2002-05-12 02:01 AM


This is great, I found cute and interesting...well penned, well done
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Macha
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since 2002-05-12
Posts 14

7 posted 2002-05-12 06:30 PM


Sounds almost like a warning.
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