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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-07 06:07 AM


You Wouldn't Be So Poor
If You Had More Money

You are the kind of person that says "It's not really me acting this way.
It's only the situation I'm in." are words you would say.
A sort of victim of circumstances it would seem.
Absolutely no control over any of your decision or plans and schemes.
Alright I know you wouldn't be so poor if you had more money.
And I know you wouldn't be so uptight if you knew how to be funny.
And I know if it didn't rain so much the skies would be nice and sunny.
And I know you expect me to kiss your rear if I want to be your honey.
But there's one thing I'd like you to understand.
You are gonna have to treat me better if you want me to be your man.

JamesLee
May07
2002


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1 posted 2002-05-07 06:11 AM


James, the title caught me as I was leaving. This is good, you do say a lot here, about positive thinkig ad acting, and treating others well.
Peace
Sandra

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2 posted 2002-05-07 08:38 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, this is such a  positive and sincere sentiment from your sensitive heart, sweet friend, I know just how you feel and I hope that she can offer you all these qualities and that you and her will share a life of joy together! (sigh) This is emotionally packed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-05-07 04:29 PM


Thank you Sandra and Noah for the nice response..
I know exactly how I want to be treated and I will make sure she understands...
Not sure if she has the ability or desire...but I will soon...James

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