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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2002-05-06 10:46 PM




I Want You To Know

There are certain times, usually late at night
When sit up thinking about the wonderful
And simply amazing person you are.
At those late hours, when I should be
Tucked away in bed, sleeping soundly
I can almost cry with the needing
Of wanting to be there lying next
To you in bed, wrapped in your arms.

I know you so well, inside and out
I know you are simply one of the most
Wonderful, giving, loyal, and sweetest
People I have ever had the honor of
Having blessed my life.

Sometimes however, I feel like the words
And truths we share just isn’t enough.
And I want more than my heart can
Begin to even express, to be able to look
Into those lovely dark brown eyes
And tell you how much I love you.
I want for you to see the truth and
The honesty that burns inside my soul
When I whisper those three words.

I want you to read what is in my eyes.
I want you to know that you are the
Most important and cherished person
That has ever entered into my existence.
I want you see the promise when I tell
You that I want to be with you for
The rest of my many days on this earth.
I want to you know and to understand
The joy and faith the happiness and hope
You give to me everyday of my life.

© Copyright 2002 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
NapalmsConstantlyConfused
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1 posted 2002-05-06 10:55 PM


and i want you to know i love you right back.

-Dave

[edited because being a good boyfriend is EASY but typing ISN'T]

[This message has been edited by NapalmsConstantlyConfused (05-06-2002 10:56 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-05-06 11:14 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friedn, I know just how you feel for you are not alone, I too always feel this way for my Joanna; I know she loves me so much, yet I always feel that is never enough and I just want to give anything to hold her and stare into her crystal eyes! (kiss on cheek) May you and Dave share a lifetime of true happiness together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-05-06 11:27 PM


lol @ Dave.
Hope every second of it comes true for you both.

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4 posted 2002-05-07 12:00 PM


this is sooooooooooooo sweet...damn i do love romance...helen
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5 posted 2002-05-07 07:46 AM


Sometimes however, I feel like the words
And truths we share just isn't enough.
And I want more than my heart can
Begin to even express, to be able to look
Into those lovely dark brown eyes
And tell you how much I love you.
I want for you to see the truth and
The honesty that burns inside my soul
When I whisper those three words.
===========================

The depth of these feelings is evident and rise off the page in this beautiful express of your hearts intent...and contentment.
This is a beautiful, touching out pouring Tara...its sincerety is its true gift.
A wonderful sharing!!
Heres to writing happy endings.


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6 posted 2002-05-07 07:49 AM


a lovely letter to him..a keepsake

M

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7 posted 2002-05-07 01:19 PM


awww...
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8 posted 2002-05-08 03:00 AM


tara,

this was just the loveliest most beautiful
poem sweetie...it gave me chill bumps
while reading it because I KNOW and FEEL
what you pen here...this was just such
an outpouring of love for him and I pray
that you two will always be together.
you both are in my thoughts dear, and
please know i wish you both only the best!
just a beautiful poem, into my library def.
take care.
love ya,
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-05-08 07:38 AM


Well said...wonderful expression...James
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10 posted 2002-05-08 06:19 PM


enjoyed
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2002-05-08 06:41 PM


I know all of this to be straight from the heart, for I've come to know the honest and sincere person that you are
This is exquisitely written
Big Hugs
Liz

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12 posted 2002-05-08 07:23 PM


Tara, this is a beautiful outpouring of love for your Dave.
Enjoyed!
~Hugs~

Magnus
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13 posted 2002-05-09 06:20 PM


Tara,  this is a cherished write that you
should one day hand to Dave....After you
kiss him and give him a great big warm hug!!!

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