Open Poetry #20 |
I Want You To Know |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I Want You To Know There are certain times, usually late at night When sit up thinking about the wonderful And simply amazing person you are. At those late hours, when I should be Tucked away in bed, sleeping soundly I can almost cry with the needing Of wanting to be there lying next To you in bed, wrapped in your arms. I know you so well, inside and out I know you are simply one of the most Wonderful, giving, loyal, and sweetest People I have ever had the honor of Having blessed my life. Sometimes however, I feel like the words And truths we share just isn’t enough. And I want more than my heart can Begin to even express, to be able to look Into those lovely dark brown eyes And tell you how much I love you. I want for you to see the truth and The honesty that burns inside my soul When I whisper those three words. I want you to read what is in my eyes. I want you to know that you are the Most important and cherished person That has ever entered into my existence. I want you see the promise when I tell You that I want to be with you for The rest of my many days on this earth. I want to you know and to understand The joy and faith the happiness and hope You give to me everyday of my life. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
and i want you to know i love you right back. -Dave [edited because being a good boyfriend is EASY but typing ISN'T] [This message has been edited by NapalmsConstantlyConfused (05-06-2002 10:56 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friedn, I know just how you feel for you are not alone, I too always feel this way for my Joanna; I know she loves me so much, yet I always feel that is never enough and I just want to give anything to hold her and stare into her crystal eyes! (kiss on cheek) May you and Dave share a lifetime of true happiness together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
lol @ Dave. Hope every second of it comes true for you both. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is sooooooooooooo sweet...damn i do love romance...helen |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sometimes however, I feel like the words And truths we share just isn't enough. And I want more than my heart can Begin to even express, to be able to look Into those lovely dark brown eyes And tell you how much I love you. I want for you to see the truth and The honesty that burns inside my soul When I whisper those three words. =========================== The depth of these feelings is evident and rise off the page in this beautiful express of your hearts intent...and contentment. This is a beautiful, touching out pouring Tara...its sincerety is its true gift. A wonderful sharing!! Heres to writing happy endings. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely letter to him..a keepsake M |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
awww... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
tara, this was just the loveliest most beautiful poem sweetie...it gave me chill bumps while reading it because I KNOW and FEEL what you pen here...this was just such an outpouring of love for him and I pray that you two will always be together. you both are in my thoughts dear, and please know i wish you both only the best! just a beautiful poem, into my library def. take care. love ya, amy "you can't stop |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well said...wonderful expression...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I know all of this to be straight from the heart, for I've come to know the honest and sincere person that you are This is exquisitely written Big Hugs Liz |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tara, this is a beautiful outpouring of love for your Dave. Enjoyed! ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tara, this is a cherished write that you should one day hand to Dave....After you kiss him and give him a great big warm hug!!! |
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