Open Poetry #20 |
Sensual Welcoming |
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Come closer I say to myself when I see you on the veranda The warm breeze allows the scent of you to surf upon the voluptuous waves invisible, but so very potent to my senses I like how you stand So sure of yourself So strong in your back, poised idle Still I wonder if your walk, your stance, your romance makes you aware of how jealous I am of the very threads against your skin One button only one and you could be mine But instead I stand here with one tie holding everything together and suddenly you realize I am watching Waiting for the perfect wind to rise and meet the nothing in between me and my wrap now at the end of my fingertips in a solid beacon of color I welcome you home [This message has been edited by rwood (05-06-2002 08:34 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I know this feeling because when I dream of my dream girl Joanna, I ak always amazed by her beauty and her sile and I feel a little jealous but then I know how I love her then I feel so so lucky! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a very nice welcoming, I liked too many lines to single any out. *s M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...WOW!!... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I like how you stand So sure of yourself So strong in your back, poised idle Still I wonder if your walk, your stance, your romance makes you aware of how jealous I am of the very threads against your skin One button only one and you could be mine But instead I stand here with one tie holding everything together and suddenly you realize I am watching Waiting for the perfect wind to rise and meet the nothing in between me and my wrap now at the end of my fingertips in a solid beacon of color I welcome you home ========================= Oh good grief...here we go again.... WHY WOULD HE EVER LEAVE??? gawwwd this is such a cool write... talk about imagery (woo hoo) Ok....I'll stop (not) heh... All teasing aside...I ADORE the adoration and admire in this... I once wrote a line about being jealous of the cigarette in his mouth( oh man is that bad) ROFL. Keeping this one...for my Reggie collection...filing it under S for steam my screen. MORE PLEASE!!!! ... and I don't know why ... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, I gotta get a veranda. Racing for the shower again! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It certainly is! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Holy smokes!! Another keeper. Perfect! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Regina And you wonder why I call you the Queen of Romance? Your words speak for themselves as you graciously weave your magic across these pages of powder blue. This was exquisite and so very much enjoyed. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Reg.... You are the best of softly sensual romantic poetry.....And this is truly another keeper! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
only one and you could be mine" Hehe, I love that thought! I felt myself eager to have him notice the longing right along with the narrator! *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Okay I too created a "Reggie Steam Machine File", and did you ever tell who introduced you to this man who only has one button holding you back? LOL, this was sizzling! Drop me a line - how's the yard going? No wonder it's taking you so long. Can't pick out one line, they are all great! ~* ~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina, you do it baaad enjoyed this view of you and yours |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very interesting...James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Noah: Thank you hon..you are both lucky. Hugs to you two darling poets.. nakdthoughts: Thank you poetess. Appreciate your thoughts. Nancy: Your WOW is wonderful to me..thanks so much and hugs to you. Janet: LOL..HEY! I know what you mean about that cigarette..gosh talk about steamy.. I appreciate you so much for filing me anywhere outside the garbage..HeHe. You do inspire me Janet Marie..that is a poem in itself. Hmmmm... Larry: LOL..shower up me poet friend there's fire in these here hills..Thank you so much for you. Martie: Thanks lady! I appreciate the validation and smile at you!! Chris: LOL..well I surely thank you for keeping anything of me. Just means I shared the way I meant to. Appreciate you! Sue: You are the greatest at sharing your heart dear lady. I thank you for that and everything you offer me as a friend. Magnus: You don't know what that means to me. I strive for sensuality and subtleness that makes people weak. That is what makes a write memorable to me. Thank you deeply. Krista: So glad you like that line. I like that one too..kindof aggressive, but sensual. Thanks for hoping for the character..You are a dear woman!!Thank you. Mysteria: MY MOTHER! I would shout it from the rooftops..Sometimes they get it really right! The gardens are on their way of being full blown bloomers and producers of veggies. Been workin my tail off but worth it!! Dark: Yessss.sometimes I do. Thank you poet for you and your thoughts this morning. Smile hugs. James: Very thankful you stopped in. Always appreciate your voice poet sir! smiles Sincerely, Reg |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Regina, yet again a great write, to be watched as that, the beckoning of one body to another, through the gaze of an eye and the hunger of the imagination. Silent thoughts that might just turn to regret. Welcome home indeed. Much enjoyed Sincerely Rick |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
...i'm jealous of HIM! kind of like a warm feeling slowly settling across the entirety of your body - as if the sun were rising over the edge of some nearby hills and lighting gingerly up the length of your skin to settle firmly in your belly. uhmm - *gulp* works as well. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow.....I have always been called the best at sad/heartbreak poems...would rather be the best at steamy ones..........whew |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
dang but you do leave the smiles in your wake... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Rick:I've made it a habit to try and see everything that makes me feel alive..no regrets darling..just time. Hugs to you!! Christopher: Oh my..I really like that feeling..Your poetic reply is more than warm..and very appreciated. thank you! jellybeans: Awww..but I bet you could pen some steam that would power up NASA..have no doubt about it..thank you poet. Sunshine: It's the company..there is all this infectious smile bugs going around in here and I musta got one and passed it on..Smile at you sunny lady!! Thanks bunches. Sincerely Reg |
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