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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-05-06 02:31 PM


She is a still moment that seems to move.

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1 posted 2002-05-06 02:35 PM


What a great short write! Bare bones truth.
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2 posted 2002-05-06 02:40 PM


How ironic and appropriate.
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3 posted 2002-05-06 03:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, and may her love for you always be a true work of art to behold forever with a smile! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-05-06 03:19 PM


Like this...James
bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-05-06 03:55 PM


Thanks. I thought I'd dust this poem off and send it out to Passions for the 20 or less brouhaha. (god I love that word)
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6 posted 2002-05-06 04:57 PM


bsquirrel - liked this a lot, much said in so few words, excellent...

BC

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7 posted 2002-05-22 05:30 PM


Thanks, BC! (just now rooting through the archives )

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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