Open Poetry #20 |
What would you do? |
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
What would you do? If I were to kiss you? What would you do? Would you look at me in shock? Or draw back your hand to give me a sock? If I were to hold you? What would you do? Would you tell me to let you go? Or do you really even know? If I were to get lost in your eyes? What would you advise? Would you say I’m crazy? Or that my mind is hazy. Now tell me true. Just what would you do. If I Wrapped you in my arms Looked into your eyes And kissed you alan 05/05/02 |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Alan...It depends on the chemistry. If there's plenty of sizzle; then you would get a big kiss back. GREAT POEM!!!!! Love your style. ***Ivy Rose |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
We have been friends for the longest time You know the answer of mine my answer to this I would return a friendly kiss Hope |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Or draw back you hand to give me a sock?" I would never hit you "Or do you really even know?" I would lean in closer "Or that my mind is hazy." I would say com'ere "Just what would you do" I would melt, of course...... |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ah, nicely done. It is indeed the question, "what would you do?" In my case, we would have a problem since I think we are both guys....ROFLOL. INclan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alan, I'll leave that for the ladies. Nice write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Alan, first, it is so nice to see you here! I may just kiss you back...ya never know! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Both...yes and no. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Heh heh. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes, you just have to "shoot first" Alan. . . great work. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If it were the appropriate time and if a lady was thinking similar thoughts of you it would be a green light...one of those what if situations...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Alan - give it all a try, nothing to lose, everything to gain... BC |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm..have been in the state of question....interesting write... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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