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Bedroom Eyes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“BEDROOM EYES” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Into this dreamy night, charm is what I see… Sensual is the touch, when you do it to me… Together we lie here, music my mind plays… At peace my thoughts, full of you, always… Pillows soft to caress, like my passion for you… The first time before, but now always new… Your smile enchanting, helps to emphasize… Whenever I look into, precious bedroom eyes… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I too always dream of this so very much; I dream that I am laying next to my sweet Joanna and before I go to sleep I kiss her, staring into her eyes and her smile before I fall asleep lovingly! (big hugggsssssss) may this smile forever dazzle you with joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Bill, this is so romantic. Enjoyed much. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill! You mean you just noticed??!!  Excellent write. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...Softly, sensual!!!! Bedroom eyes enhanced for me through your gorgeous poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Another keeper BC....as all of your poetry always is.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is utterly utterly perfect, do I like it? I love it. No one writes quite the same as you do darling heart, and this is a perfect example of your outstanding quality. Not only is it well written, it holds the form perfectly. Absolutely excellent    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oooooh Bill...lovely!!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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