Open Poetry #20 |
Light Skirt Drift |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Light Skirt Drift I thought I’d warned you all about me I’m unreliable and untrustworthy I’m never faithful I’m afraid to say I simply can’t help drifting away I don’t stay I will always roam Rarely returning to my own home I won’t promise to stay by your side What’s the point you know I’ve lied? I thought you realised the way I am I seem to go off with any man My intention is to try to be good To do the things I know I should I think that I’d like to maybe stay But them I seem to somehow stray I can’t resist the urge for new But maybe I will drift back to you I thought I’d explained all of me My wanderlust and infidelity Why can’t you accept all this? My inability to curb my wish to kiss I don’t know why it surprises you After all we did talk it all through You don’t expect me to change surely I thought you really understood me Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, darling girl....The title is perfect for this post....Oh my, one will have to keep their eye on this lady... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha, sweet sis...this was PERFECT lol... And yes you are all these things aren't ya haha....Hmmm me knows different but I won't ever tell...our secret. OOPS Love you! Take care. And I'll be talking to you soon. your lil sis, Amy "you can't stop |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Are you really like this? James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Marsha, you are truly a very wonderful and trustworthy person and I know that your love will always be blessed to have you and drift with you lightly heart in heart! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
The title drew me in Marsha! Good write but I am sure you're not like this!? No way....not our Mushy Girl! ~Luv and hugs~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
See..what did I tell you...you are unbelievable sometimes *winkin' here hugs M |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
I liked this. I agree with the other people here. I've only been here a few days, but you don't seem like that. Of course, you probably know yourself better that I, a stranger, do. Anyway, about the poem itself. It was very good, and the rhyme was steady and reliable. The meter was a little awkward, but it really wasn't very noticable. It was fine! Love ya, Mushy! Nice work! |
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