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Summer And Fine Wine
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Summer And Fine Wine |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Summer And Fine Wine ~*~ May it seems brings warm dreams Of ocean breeze where seagulls fly Happy to dance with a stranger As sand dazzles the naked eye Like sparkling crystal that awaits fine wine Glistening, pensively waiting for the touch of lovers hand To pour out passion In the heat of summer As the ocean waves seem to echo Softly saying I love you Written in sand Toasted with fine wine BloomingRose |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
BR darling girl, what a delight it is to read your writing. I get to be the first to say how fabulous this is. I’m always, eternally stunned by the way you shape and form a poem. This is outstandingly good. Wonderful writing, excellent utterly utterly perfect. I absolutely love it    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marsha, Thank you for your lovely reply! So very kind of you. Deb  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Deb! It's been a while since we last saw you and your lovely words...so good to have you back, and so much beauty in your words... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderfully written - enjoyed! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of true love always bring a smile to my face and light these pages! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This just feels and sounds delicious. Sandra |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Deb, I will drink a toast to you for this lovely piece. The words positively flow, like a fine vintage bouquet. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sounds like we all are looking forward to summer and all that it may bring. Thanks so much for all your warm replies! Hugs, Deb |
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