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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2002-05-04 07:45 AM

Repost request:

The Golden Key

Not a law but a simple gauge
Given in store within our fate
On stone on page from age to age
Passing alone from late to late.

We hold on lip a simple truth
A weight that tips the justice scale
Ignored by most mainly youth
No host, no grail, no cloak or vail.

It lives a presence day to day
An essence in a simple core
A bray, a say, a path, a way
And stays in truth forever more.

It brooks to you, to all that heed
To look within your shoal the whole.
It takes no breed to work it's deed
Your pull of soul will pole the goal.

Just do unto others each one
As would unto thyself have done.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-05-04 08:09 AM

We hold on lip a simple truth
A weight that tips the justice scale
Ignored by most mainly youth
No host, no grail, no cloak or vail.
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A bray, a say, a path, a way
And stays in truth forever more.
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It takes no breed to work it's deed
Your pull of soul will pole the goal.

Just do unto others each one
As would unto thyself have done.
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Good morning Sy-babes!!

This is classic Sy poetry...full of life's most simple and yet profound truths...
wisdom wrapped in rhyme, etched in time and engraved on this heart of mine.
Thank you to Sun for her request of this gem of pen...its a reminder we all need to heed.
You are the keeper of many keys me Stinkylove.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-05-04 08:10 AM

...thank you, Sy! It is still on my desk....in a frame!

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2002-05-04 08:51 AM

Seymour~ Wow! Look at you go! Not only does this poem have such profound meaning to it, it's also so intricately woven. I love the rhyme from line to line and also the rhyming done within each line. Everything jumps out at you and the message is loud and clear, but you say it in such a soft way that it leaves the reader feeling touched, rather than preached at. Lovely!

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-05-04 08:52 AM

Seymour darling boy this is awesome, truly exceptional writing. You again have excelled darling boy, you really are a master at this, capturing the words and pinning them to the page. Absolutely first class, you really are a very very fine writer. As I’ve mentioned once of maybe twice. And this with its perfect and exquisite language usage is simply stunning.

Utterly utterly excellent writing and of course I love it utterly utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-05-04 09:03 AM

Sy~Such a wonderful morning read!
Enjoyed this one very much.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-05-04 09:41 AM

JM,
Good morning my Tinkerbell. It's stinky love.
And where shall we fly today?
Winliewinkie Randy Stinky.

Sunshine,
You are the greatest.

Krista,
This is an exceptional reply and I humbly thank you for it.

Marsha,
You are utterly, utterly a doll.

Enchantress,
Thank you, hugs and love back.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-05-04 10:16 AM

(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, yes, your words resemble His Golden Rule, may we all treat each other the way we deserve to be treated to establish harmony and comfort for all! (big hugggssssss) This is an absolutely wonderful poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-05-04 10:21 AM

If we could all live by these words, what
a respectful world this would be...

Nicely done Sy!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2002-05-04 10:25 AM

Noah,
Thank you my friend.

Magnus,
Amen, it would help, Thank you.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-05-04 03:57 PM

No one could ever say it enough...perhaps it will sink in...James

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2002-05-04 04:26 PM

James,
Perhaps, thank you James

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

12 posted 2002-05-04 07:07 PM

Sy,
this brings forth images of the wisdom of 'The Water Babies', except your lanuage is exquisite and your metre is perfect as usual.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

13 posted 2002-05-04 08:04 PM

A golden poem of truth. Enjoyed!

Deb

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2002-05-04 09:16 PM

Keth,
A beautiful coment, thank you.

BloomingRose
And thank for the read and reply.

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