Open Poetry #20 |
Morning Wake Up Call |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
And so I am here, once again with thoughts, wondering, an avalanche of unreadable fears, stilling time. I find the silence tempering the winds of want, while I await the sun breaking through and the singing of the day ahead. I shield my spirit from the crush of pain, from the foolish lyrics that play in my head. I alphabetize my memories, placing chaos before order, deceit before truth, confusion before sanity. Do you remember me at all? Do you know the depth I traveled in heart to reach the level of you, that releases beyond reason? Do the unspoken, these papered thoughts, lay carded at your door? Why are the hug of words so important to the edges of my world? Why do the hidden dreams hold your allure behind the shadowed walls, allowing me to follow piperless? I am pending the moments, titled in new, dusted in the warmth of smiles when nature calls out its sing and the fears drop away to the naked me, laying here in my perception of truth. Too serious I know, an unfinished me awaiting the polish, your shine, to treasure my antiqueness, to lay me in comfort inside these spinning wheels of thoughts, to weave another day into another and another and another, until time covers me in you and we share in the light what I know the darkness holds, for us both. M *thank you Marge for the papered thoughts *s "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-04-2002 03:23 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings...James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
M, this is amazing writing...very profound and the vocab is super cool. your style is always wonderful to me...but something in this says more...you have such a way with words that reaches deep in to a level most can't touch...great write!! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) And may you continue to always alphabetize your memories dear to your heart and find the distinguishment between all your heart longs to know, sweet friend, this is a wonderful view of wisdom as all your thoughtful poems are! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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