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You Love Me And Love I You
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You Love Me And Love I You |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Girl I love your bright eyes so blue and that look that says you're you. Girl I love your long black hair that falls around the smile you wear. Girl I love your special voice that only I can hear by choice. When the evening sun drops low and we share memories and soul I just sit there lost in time so happy girl that you're still mine. And with nothing left for us to prove you love me and I love you. The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello Eric..nice to see you and this romantic melody of love. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Awwww... that was really sweet. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very tender and romantic Eric. Enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I'm so glad for you. Thanks for sharing a glimpse of your second half. Melton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
PT darling boy I think this is utterly utterly spectacular. The flow the construction the rhythm all combine to make this a truly outstandingly fabulous poem. Rarely is writing this good, certainly this far exceeds my expectations and my expectations for you are always high. YOU are a very good writer and this proves it. I truly believe this is one of your best utterly utterly perfect Absolutely excellent work   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are a true romantic and I know your sweetheart will always be blessed by the true love you share! (big huggsssssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-03-2002 08:04 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh...I like this song from you Ethome, it has been far too long since you last graced our pages... welcome home! |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Cool write! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You know it goes without saying how I feel sweet NB poet man |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Many many thanks to all who were able to take the time to read this and appreciate the benefits of a long lasting love! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This says it all...you are a blessed man...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks James much appreciated! |
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