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Times Flow Inspired by Seymour’s Ebb and Flow
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Times Flow Inspired by Seymour’s Ebb and Flow |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Times Flow Inspired by Seymour’s Ebb and Flow I’d build you sandcastles grain by grain Spin fairytale dreams in your brain Turn back those waves lapping sand Deny that time lies in hand The rainbow’s gift of fairies wishes I’d bestow bedewed heart’s kisses Circles of light that danced with glee Would bring the vision close of me I’d search the heavens to bring a star To light your way when it’s too far Time cannot bind you in its line Not while you have the gift of rhyme You’re not held in tyranny Release the rhyme that sets you free We’ll swoop and fly in dream of song Not notice time moving ever on I’d build you castles of times sand If you’ll walk into my wonderland Deny time’s taste on your tongue Instead live life that’s just begun Breathe in the scent of evermore On wings of pleasure you can soar I’ll take you where you wish to go Just let me catch you in my flow Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (05-03-2002 11:51 AM).] |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
On wings of pleasure you can soar I’ll take you where you wish to go Just let me catch you in my flow" SweetMarsha~ This is divine poetess...I love the soft beauty of it. May I get caught up in the flow?  *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW! You've got me caught up in your flow  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sis, as always pure elegance from your pen. this flowed so softly and gently and i got caught up in every word...you share your heart with this one, and what a lovely view it is...as always you have my respect and love! love you. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - nicely written, I liked the words, the flow, and the poem. Excellent... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, This is my most favorite poem of yours. I love the concept and the imagery. Full of awesome lines. Very well done indeed. A keeper.It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Indeed this is a magic poem But a poem that I cannot roam My world of self indulgence leads To the penicillin of my needs. My butterfly roams high and dry The only apple of my eye. But your friendship is not forgot My daisy of forget-me-not.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may time continue to flow and may you be granted with all these rainbows and sand castle dreams always, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I can tell Seymour really loves this just as I do, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The last stanza was my favorite, about not allowing yrself to taste time on your tongue. Wow.... Special stuff. |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
This is delicate, lovely lace silk ribbons, and captured grace |
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