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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the pickup is our villa there under the oak tree on our road the dirt one with the ruts that makes you fall into me when I drive wrong on purpose when you wear your skinny cotton and no shoes, and no secrets under and we spend someday sometimes with the doors open wide and the radio playing songs that no one knows but we have memorized it seems they always come on before and after, and when you are just laying on my lap looking up at me eyes and I am drawing circles there making finger jewels on your skinends not that you need any decortations more then those you have that were made for you in heaven ©Dark |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"That were made for you in heaven." Like this...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when you wear your skinny cotton and no shoes, and no secrets under =============================== and the radio playing songs that no one knows but we have memorized it seems they always come on before and after, and when you are just laying on my lap (dont ya love how that happeneds)  looking up at me eyes and I am drawing circles there making finger jewels on your skinends not that you need any decortations more then those you have that were made for you in heaven ==================================== you have captured this intimate moment of content with a lovely delicacy DS... definatly an "eye sigh" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~Your imagery takes me there... I wish for a sizzling hot summer day ...a pickup truck, and.. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm  ahhhhhhha, good morning D  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
James, Thank you sir. Janet Marie, you are cute with your little note reads, thank you so much lady fair for the time you take in your replies..we are all blessed by you here. Enchantress, hope it is very warm today and that you have time for a bumpy ride..thank you ms.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
SEA....morning lil friend, thank you for the m&ms...wink. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
DS~ Any day, any time, any place I love this line: "making finger jewels on your skinends" Thank you for the savouring read this morning. Time to start the day now! *hugs* ~KRista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms smittykitty, have a wonderful day..and night..thank you for the eye touch |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
a damp day and sun melds skin to skin simply by bejeweled [or bewitched] words... ~*~ You, sir, remain a writer to which many of us remain drawn... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms noir it is a pleasure to read your replies...and your poems too thank you ms |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, No stranger and nothing dark about this. Enjoyed. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS Enjoyed seeing you in this private place. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
melody lingers in her hair after he hums mid-day songs on a never stop escape to somewhere else Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sy, thank you my friend Ms martie, you are welcome here anytime, enjoy your eyes Indigo, somewhere places right under the edge of everywhere but where no-one sees thanks babe |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dark - This is why my foreverman turns too sharply on country roads. So that I slide over to him and our lips catch each other like two forgotton already-licked lollipops. Loved this, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, this is sooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, I just love that thought of memorizing the lyrics to songs never played on the radio that only heartbeats can produce! (big hugggssssss) This is such a beautiful poem as always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I love pick-up truck daze. You drive right into my mind D. Sincerely, Reg |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Damn! I need an extended holiday like this. Loved th' poem, as always. And as a bonus, it made me think of the Cure's "Just Like Heaven," one of the best winter summer songs ever! OOo, inspiration.[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-03-2002 04:16 PM).] |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Makes me wish we had a pickup. Really love the innocent sweetness of this. Would make a lovely afternoon. There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Nightshade, thank you so much lady friend Noah, bless you amigo, thanks vandana, thank you for your reviews and comments regina, always a place for another set of eyes in my ol truck..pick ya up in 15? thanks babe BSQ, thanks amigo, so glad you enjoyed the scene PhaChi, any set of wheels will work..just need to each other and a sky...thanks babe..I appreciate you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
nothing but smiles and some awesome memories..oh yeah...thank you Ds.. Like a red brick, |
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