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TriXter
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since 2002-03-20
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The One

0 posted 2002-05-02 08:39 PM



The news i got today, it broke my heart
everyday i saw you, you made me smile
with the Graduation approching i only hoped you'd be mine.
Building up srtength to ask you those words,
I was almost ready.

Picked out a new outfit for grad, so that I would stand out,
Who would be the most handsome guy int he crowd, there id be.
with a smile in the halls, and a hug now and then, i swore id ask you on the weekend.

I spoke to a freind, about who i would ask,
you have a boyfreind, this i was not aware,
5 months ago you told my friend,
he tried to assure me you might be over,
I would not even bother trying.

heart broken, teary in eye.
looks like im goin solo, I shal say with a sigh.

The man of few words...

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-05-02 08:46 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, I'm so sorry to hear this, sweet friend, I know just how you feel, for I am graduating in a month and I have been alone for so so long and I can't help but cry to myself because I love my dream girl Joanna so so much, but she lives a couple thousand miles away from me and I only wish I could kiss her magically after all the ceremonies! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2002-05-02 08:46 PM


Your talent for purging the heart to the paper is impeccable. Write away the sadness, to make lots of room for the glorious.
ThisDiamond

DawnG
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3 posted 2002-05-17 02:17 PM


I'm so sorry you got this heartfelt news.


                              Dawn

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