Open Poetry #20 |
Sisters Three |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sisters Three ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sisters three, these girls were born Hearts of love in sweet adorn Margie and Shari with Lori born last Steeped in memories from a loving past~ Across the crimson sky of night we light a candle of vanilla delight Knowing Shari will see the glow of two loving sisters here below~ Then as if in soft reply comes a light into vision's eye Star of twinkle into view Gently saying, 'I miss you too' In loving memory of Shari Cowart Ricker Just because sometimes she touches me when she knows I need her twinkle~ May 2, 2002 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, How tender and sad... Such a touching tribute. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge Heart hugs to you in understanding. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge, such a beautiful thought for one loved so deeply....BIG BIG HUGS!!! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Marge, this is so sweet. I've two sisters too, I'm the youngest. I'll bet she send you twinkling stars all the time. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Marge - this is a lovely, touching poem. The pic is beautiful as well. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl my fabulously talented and cleverly artistic aunt how special and beautiful is this. You know I have a brother and a sister both younger than I am, and I can see the enduring and loving ties you have with both your sisters is the same as the ties I have with my siblings. I really do love the spirit that flows in this delightful paint of your thought. Really beautiful work here my favourite auntie Margie girl Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Awwww Marge, this was so special. I can't imagine how hard it must be to lose a sister. Enjoy every one of her 'twinkles.' Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
tears and more tears, though this is truly lovely. How fortunate to have the love Hugs Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Across the crimson sky of night we light a candle of vanilla delight Knowing Shari will see the glow of two loving sisters here below~ ============================== She inspires beautiful things in you... a tender touching tribute Margie heart-hugs. mothyme ... and I don't know why ... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A touch seraphic from a member seraphic... |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Methinks she's got you twinkling too... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Lovely wonderful write. Sy |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ Sweet lady, this is beautiful...her twinkle shines in this poem. *tender hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Thanks everyone~ This has been a roller-coaster day and your sweet sharing and caring has given my heart a much-needed lift~ I thank you all~ *Hugs* and lots of love~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
absolutley beautiful |
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Raz Member
since 2002-04-30
Posts 51Quebec, Canada |
Double, double toil and trouble; Fire burn, and cauldron bubble. For some reason I thought of Macbeth... more from the title than the content of your poem. Lovely poem, by the way. -Raz [This message has been edited by Raz (05-02-2002 11:09 PM).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A bitter-sweet poem, Marge. Hope you are well! Corinne |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: A precious poem for sisters three. It's a tear-jerker for sure! Beautifully done. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You can certainly tug at the old heartstrings, Marge. This is a beautiful piece of writing and a wonderful tribute.. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...what a beautiful and moving poem you have written. Such sisterly love dripping from each word. A beautiful tribute to the memory of your sister Shari. ***Ivy Rose |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Again I thank you all for your heart-felt sincere comments~ Sisters are supposed to be forever ... and so she is~ In her twinkle I see her telling me, 'I've left a light on for you'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just cause I need to~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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