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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-05-02 07:30 PM



Sisters Three

~*Marge Tindal*~

Sisters three, these girls were born
Hearts of love in sweet adorn
Margie and Shari with Lori born last
Steeped in memories from a loving past~

Across the crimson sky of night
we light a candle of vanilla delight
Knowing Shari will see the glow
of two loving sisters here below~

Then as if in soft reply
comes a light into vision's eye
Star of twinkle into view
Gently saying,
'I miss you too'


In loving memory of Shari Cowart Ricker
Just because sometimes she touches me when
she knows I need her twinkle~
May 2, 2002

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-05-02 07:35 PM


Marge,
How tender and sad... Such a touching tribute.

Martie
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2 posted 2002-05-02 07:54 PM


Marge

Heart hugs to you in understanding.


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3 posted 2002-05-02 07:59 PM


Marge,  such a beautiful thought for one
loved so deeply....BIG BIG HUGS!!!

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4 posted 2002-05-02 08:04 PM



Marge, this is so sweet.
I've two sisters too, I'm the youngest.

I'll bet she send you twinkling stars all the time.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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5 posted 2002-05-02 08:24 PM


Marge - this is a lovely, touching poem. The pic is beautiful as well. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-05-02 08:24 PM


Auntie Margie girl my fabulously talented and cleverly artistic aunt how special and beautiful is this. You know I have a brother and a sister both younger than I am, and I can see the enduring and loving ties you have with both your sisters is the same as the ties I have with my siblings. I really do love the spirit that flows in this delightful paint of your thought.

Really beautiful work here my favourite auntie Margie girl

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

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at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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7 posted 2002-05-02 08:56 PM


Awwww Marge, this was so special. I can't imagine how hard it must be to lose a sister. Enjoy every one of her 'twinkles.'   Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

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8 posted 2002-05-02 09:02 PM


tears and more tears, though this is truly lovely. How fortunate to have the love
Hugs
Liz

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9 posted 2002-05-02 09:05 PM


Across the crimson sky of night
we light a candle of vanilla delight
Knowing Shari will see the glow
of two loving sisters here below~
==============================

She inspires beautiful things in you...
a tender touching tribute Margie
heart-hugs.
mothyme

... and I don't know why ...
Why should love come down and just sweep me away
I want to fly ... but there are so many things in my way.

J Browne

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10 posted 2002-05-02 09:10 PM



A touch seraphic
from a member seraphic...

Nan
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11 posted 2002-05-02 09:14 PM


Methinks she's got you twinkling too...

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12 posted 2002-05-02 10:18 PM


Marge,
Lovely wonderful write. Sy

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Marge~ Sweet lady, this is beautiful...her twinkle shines in this poem.  

*tender hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2002-05-02 10:40 PM


*Thanks everyone~
This has been a roller-coaster day and your sweet sharing and caring has given my heart a much-needed lift~
I thank you all~
*Hugs* and lots of love~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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15 posted 2002-05-02 10:49 PM


absolutley beautiful
Raz
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16 posted 2002-05-02 11:08 PM


Double, double toil and trouble;
Fire burn, and cauldron bubble.

For some reason I thought of Macbeth... more from the title than the content of your poem.

Lovely poem, by the way.

-Raz

[This message has been edited by Raz (05-02-2002 11:09 PM).]

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17 posted 2002-05-02 11:08 PM


A bitter-sweet poem, Marge.

Hope you are well!

Corinne

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18 posted 2002-05-02 11:08 PM


Marge:  A precious poem for sisters three.
It's a tear-jerker for sure!  Beautifully done.

Betty Lou Hebert

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19 posted 2002-05-02 11:11 PM


You can certainly tug at the old heartstrings, Marge. This is a beautiful piece of writing and a wonderful tribute..
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20 posted 2002-05-02 11:26 PM


Marge...what a beautiful and moving poem you have written.  Such sisterly love dripping from each word. A beautiful tribute to the memory of your sister Shari.

***Ivy Rose

Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2002-05-03 08:39 AM


*Again I thank you all for your heart-felt sincere comments~
Sisters are supposed to be forever ...
and so she is~
In her twinkle I see her telling me,
'I've left a light on for you'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Marge Tindal
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Just cause I need to~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

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