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I Just Fell...
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I Just Fell... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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I Just Fell I just fell in love with you on that special day Tongue tied around you at first, I simply did not know what to say Realising I was falling in love with you was the sweetest revelation When we touched that first time, my heart felt the most thrilling sensation I fall in love with you as each second passes by For you unlocked my chains, and freed the love inside When I look into your beautiful eyes, I get weak in the glance I threw all caution to the wind, with you I took the chance With you I just fell, I've never felt so much so fast I know now without a doubt that I've found the love of a lifetime, at last There is something between us that you and I can not deny Never will you hear from me the sad words of "goodbye" I just fell, I stumbled into a love so true There are no other words left to say, just I love you I can't wait to see your loving face once more Until then lost in the heavens I shall soar "you can't stop |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is so very beautiful, sweet friend, serendipity is indeed the most magical way of falling in love and I hope he will always be there and will share a lifetime of happiness with you! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart OH MY this is so beautiful an amazing stunning example of written heart’s sigh. You darling heart really do write with light. Absolutely awesome writing skills. Such an outstanding and beautifully crafted piece of writing, I’ve read fabulous pieces from you before this is simply incredibly beautiful. I love it utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (04-09-2002 10:19 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sometimes that's the way love happens! Beautiful sweet Any~Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
When it's good...it's good! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"I just fell" *smiles* That's my fave part of the entire poem. Thanks for the smile! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Amy, Yup...the best kind of love always sneaks up on you. But I forgot it trips you in the process. Enjoy the fall!  Nice write. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
That's the best way, I think |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aimster A delightful write, enjoyed |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Lovely and Brilliant! "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, "I've fallen and I can't get up??" never get up again. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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