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Old Lover
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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What hold is it he has on me is it the simple joys lack of that's in my current lifes bequest or is it more; remembered love. It seems he has my memories so strange to think someone else does is that what makes it feel so good to talk about the time that was? Can life be fun like that again? (how quickly the hurt fades away) I hold fast to the good times thus and wonder will there be more days. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, I thought you meant OLD. I didn't realize you meant old. And the anwer is yes. I mean YES! Good write.  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Each new day will always be followed by another .... and fade they will. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Sandra! You ask questions to which I do not have the answers. The hurt fades but the memories last forever. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes of course...as new experiences and memories unfold they take precedence...James |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I could feel the missing in this, Sandra. And the happiness of the memories. You captured both well. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, I can feel such heartfelt yearning in your words, my heart goes out to you and I know deep down that you will find so many wonderful days like this and love will always shine across the meadows of your heart! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your pen is far mightier than the words of any knight....Surely the lady shall win the joust and the prize... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Guess what? I just added you to my library. You keep stunning me. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sandra, much enjoyed this read and the passion that you add to each line. Inspired again. The memories that our joys do hold Can fill our hearts or leave them cold The gift we shared that was once love Was granted till its end did shove I hold to you by visions of my mind that ever come Once you were my passion and my life beneath the sun But now I talk with words benign and memories of the past Sorry and quite often sad, those times just didn’t last But days begin with new delights to take our hearts away Old lover, tend my memories, and help me through this day Enjoyed the words. Sincerely Rick |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Yes Sandra, it can and it will. When you least expect it, those days will come to you once again. Just hang on dear. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
it is just around the corner at that place where time has it's hands taped together enjoyed it ms sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well you never know...there might be alot more memories sandra awaiting you..hugss nicely penned hon ~Victoria |
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