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Even Still
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Even Still From the moment that I met you, you took my breath completely away From the moment our eyes met,I was tounge tied, with no words to say You made my heart beat fast, as love begin to enter inside of me and you As we held each others gaze, we were creating the beginning of our dreams coming true Months since then have passed, but you're still the one inside my heart Your beauty and grace is like no other, you've had me from the start Everyday with you, is like living in a make believe land You just seem to have this way of knowing how I feel, you simply understand Our souls connected all those months ago, our hearts keep us tied together How long will this love last? I know that I will sincerely love you forever From the first time I heard your voice, it was as though an Angel had been chosen for me You set me apart from the pain in my life, allowing me to be free It's as though you and I are the only ones, on our own ocean of love We just drift by in our happiness and bliss, guided by our Lord above My heart beats only for you, as I listen to you softly calling my name I know that you're the one I want to marry, my life never to be the same Loving you as I do, I've come to finally understand and see There is no you or me, we've emerged into this wonderfulness of we You heart matches mine, as our souls dance together in perfect time I slowly cast my eyes to heavenly skies, thanking the Angels that you are mine Memories wash over my mind, as I reminise today for a moment or two On our anniversary and everyday, I want you to know how much I love you From our simple conversations, to our lovemaking, our love is the most purest form of true I'll be with you always my sweetheart, wherever you go and whatever you do After all this time, yes you're still the one who makes me smile so bright As we both bask in this wonderful feeling, of loves casting light Our union is one to be cherished, I promise you my love today and forever more Thank you for believing in me and loving me, you've opened for both of us a brand new door "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (05-02-2002 06:48 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Loving you as I do, I've come to finally understand and see There is no you or me, we've emerged into this wonderfulness of we =============================== Isnt this what we spend our whole lives searching for? ... How wonderful you found it...and it seems Happy Anniversary wishes are in order.  I wish nothing but happiness and sunshine for you Amy-girl... its your time.  ... and I don't know why ... |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Amy lil sis/ cousin / auntie this is truly beautiful writing, this is what every person desires the love of the lifetime, and it’s so clear you have found it. I love this delicate soft declaration of your heart. Happy Anniversary Amy and J, may each day strengthen the love you share, and I wish you eternal joy   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ya make my eyes get all misty.... you write your love so sweetly, so genuine....it touches me. This is beyond beautiful Amy  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Loving you as I do, I've come to finally understand and see There is no you or me, we've emerged into this wonderfulness of we You heart matches mine, as our souls dance together in perfect time I slowly cast my eyes to heavenly skies, thanking the Angels that you are mine"  (smiles) Oh Amy, this is absolutely beautiful, tears came to my eyes reading this knowing that with a true golden heart like yours you are bound to hold your true love close to your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Amy, She is...Completely Smitten! [This message has been edited by Larry C (05-02-2002 08:40 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart OH my word this is excellent writing, what can I say darling your love clearly shines through every single word. You’ve always written well, often excellently, but J clearly inspires your pen to such a degree that you shin like the star YOU ARE. You know I love this, it flows with the smoothness of silk, beautiful work darling girl utterly utterly superb, and of course I love it utterly Love you xx Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Amy, You do this so well. You hold up your love for everyone to see. I'm so glad you have found it You deserve it chickie Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (05-03-2002 01:15 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I've just melted |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Now that's love! Deb |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, dear Amy/Aim...."You set me apart from the pain in my life, allowing me to be free"..THAT is what it should all be about, I am very happy that the freedom is there...very gentle smile...Well done and said, gentle one..well done |
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