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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-02 05:54 AM


Someday It Will

Tell me this.
Just because I was unable
to give or receive love
at a time that was
very important...
that doesn't mean
I should be punished
for the rest of my life.
Does it?
I didn't
think so!!!
But it doesn't
change the way I feel.
Perhaps someday it will.

JamesLee
May02
2002


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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-05-02 06:01 AM


those somedays
can get you every time..*s
I liked..

M

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2002-05-02 07:08 AM


Oh, how I relate
I wouldn't call it punishment
but so unfare
Some things that are so certain to be, were never meant to be
You say so much in this short passage
WEll done
Liz

Marsha
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3 posted 2002-05-02 07:19 AM


James darling boy YOU are a superb writer my friend, the flow and structure of this is wonderful. Fabulous writing and the language usage in it is stunning, a deep and meaningful piece with much to ponder in the soul

Absolutely excellent


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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4 posted 2002-05-02 08:49 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, I think we can all be frustrated over this fact every now and then, sweet friend, it may be so confusing but I know deep down what we lose was never meant to be and that there will always be a love that you will definitely find that will always remain true and fill you with joy! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-05-02 08:56 AM


Some days are like that James.
Good write!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-05-02 09:07 AM


James,
There is always some day, enjoyed.

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just out of reach
7 posted 2002-05-02 10:01 AM


James - oh yes..I understand completely. Well done and enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-05-03 09:56 AM


Been there and empathize.  This, too, will pass

vandana
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9 posted 2002-05-03 10:13 AM


liked it
SmittenKitten
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10 posted 2002-05-03 10:22 AM



James~ You've expressed your pain well sir...such an aching write.

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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