Open Poetry #20 |
Someday It Will |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Someday It Will Tell me this. Just because I was unable to give or receive love at a time that was very important... that doesn't mean I should be punished for the rest of my life. Does it? I didn't think so!!! But it doesn't change the way I feel. Perhaps someday it will. JamesLee May02 2002 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
those somedays can get you every time..*s I liked.. M |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, how I relate I wouldn't call it punishment but so unfare Some things that are so certain to be, were never meant to be You say so much in this short passage WEll done Liz |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James darling boy YOU are a superb writer my friend, the flow and structure of this is wonderful. Fabulous writing and the language usage in it is stunning, a deep and meaningful piece with much to ponder in the soul Absolutely excellent Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh James, I think we can all be frustrated over this fact every now and then, sweet friend, it may be so confusing but I know deep down what we lose was never meant to be and that there will always be a love that you will definitely find that will always remain true and fill you with joy! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Some days are like that James. Good write! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, There is always some day, enjoyed. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
James - oh yes..I understand completely. Well done and enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Been there and empathize. This, too, will pass |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
James~ You've expressed your pain well sir...such an aching write. *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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