Open Poetry #20 |
My Four Legged Mate |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
COCO AND WOOFA * * * You lie beneath my feet So devoted you are to me Lately you've been hard of hearing And you are having difficulty to see But you've always been so faithful Since the day we brought you home Always happy being around us Never feeling the need to roam They say you're man's best friend And I suppose that must be true For your love is unconditional These qualities in humans can be few You've been such a big part of our family Who has his special place on the mat But your nose was put out of joint On the day we brought a cat Now you two are real good buddies 'tho you growl when in a mood But you never once complain When I see you demolish the cat's food You've brought us so much happiness Now living out your golden years I don't look forward to your passing For I may drown in all my tears Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Nope...you won't drown but you'll be miserable. I can sure relate. Domino is fourteen this summer. Liked your write. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sue, I was smiling all the way through the poem, and then right when I got to the end, I felt my heart was about to break feeling the grief in your heart! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Sue, my heart goes out to you and I know your sweet Coco and Woofa will live on for you always and when the time is right, they may go on but deep down, they will never ever leave you alone, for not only are dogs a man and woman's best friend but I know deep down Coco and Woofa will always see you as the best owner they could ever have! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have one of the most loving and caring hearts out of everyone I know, you are a true angel, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Touching and wise for what it says. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Suetang - oh, how this brought back precious memories of our dear, departed Doberman,"Goose". She was the best friend I ever had and her unconditional love is missed to this day. This is a very sweet poem. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Pet lovers all go through that agaonizing day when a pet has to be put to sleep. It's so painful and yet when you measure the years of companionship and enjoyment, you know it's worth it. We have gone trhough this many times and probably will again. You never forget any of them, but it's good to give another one a home! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
In the picture, I could see a faithful friend, lying tired in rest. Struggling a little....but still there, still alive and loving you... I know well the feeling of loss of one of our own pets....I have cried countless tears in mourn of each passing... They are a part of us, of our home and our family.... Thank You Sue for another touching piece of your beautiful words and heart. |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
So often I feel this family member gets lost in the shuffle of every day activities...thank you for your beautiful write about a dog's faithfulness to his family, and reminding me how short our time is with these beloved friends. As I type, Essie lays under my desk by my feet...as always. She is a constant comfort there, my 10-yr-old canine companion. I think I'll take her to the game today! |
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