Open Poetry #20 |
Death To Duplicity |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The house grows still, and fondles with an eerie silence To agitate my mind, a stirring of these restless pieces The time of sad indulgence, written on in quiet violence To conjugate symmetric lines until the searching ceases Then what enfolds these thoughts to rise above demise? To pepper every conscious wince in antiseptic recess The trigger of the shot once fired in echo sharp reprise To limit sheltered singular reminders of a friend in regress To sleep becomes the focused mission where I state my case This information falls together in completed puzzle pieces Too right to misinform my heart of truths that I must face To lay my head upon the chest of God as all my worry ceases Copyright Kkh 5/1/02 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"To sleep becomes the focused mission where I state my case" Well said. Sometimes talking to the pillow is the best solution. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The house grows still, and fondles with an eerie silence To agitate my mind, a stirring of these restless pieces Profound words, and always an enjoyable read from you!!! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The last line was worth the whole poem. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I agree with bsquirrel |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
excellent title, and loved this line quote: peace Chris |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
TD....this is a beauty....Make sure you keep it...Lock it away and bring it out every now and then....to read and to share!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Intense. I like it. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Katheen, this is sooooo powerfully thought-provoking, sweet friend, it always does help to take a rest and ease in mind in comfort to contemplate and learn more about what you are facing! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is indeed very heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
TD, I agree with them all. Very good write. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Excellent!!... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
To sleep becomes the focused mission where I state my case ThisDiamond - Awesome write. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You folks always bless me with such kind and inspiring comment on my work. I see things through your eyes, that I didn't see when I wrote it. Appreciate all of you. ThisDiamond |
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