Open Poetry #20 |
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Blues and Rhythm |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind ![]() |
We look at it sometimes like this true love identical twins equal devotion spiral blue yellow daffodil unmistakable color s washing over an erotic hush spilling from poetic lips revealing a redemption of heaven comfort, your arms, a dream I hold reality desire safe caress of feeling, tip of finger naked gliding gentle butterfly floating soft firefly of October skies Autumn beauty winter coldness silence even blues and rhythm playing "Misty for Me" ~Sinking fast into an ocean of you, what if I told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-01-2002 05:10 PM).] |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You're so good at this. |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, An invitation I would hate to refuse! Great write. ![]() It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"an erotic hush spilling from poetic lips revealing a redemption of heaven comfort, your arms a dream I hold reality desire safe" ![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo lovely and sensual, sweet friend, may the butterfly of your dreams always flutter happily in your heart and conduct the blues and rhythm and jazz of joy to you! (kiss on cheek) YAY!!! CONGRATULATIONS ON 3000, SWEET FRIEND, THIS IS EXCELLENT, WE ALL LOVE YOU SO MUCH! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes It played Misty for me. Beautiful write, enjoyed. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I ADORE THIS. Truly, I love music themed poetry...talk about twins!!! smiles across miles...I just may go download that, as I tuck this into library! ![]() |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - I'll play Misty for you anytime. Used to with the band a while ago, beautiful song... And beautiful poem... BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
tch...forgot to click! sigh... |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
blues from the Green one. . . I like it. . . wonderful. . . just wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Remember the song well....and the movie... Excellent poem...love the feel of this.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gosh Lauren...this is SO dang good!! LOVE it!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
excellent write, Lauren -Dave |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bump! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sounds like the perfect love song if you can keep up with the beat!! You got rhythm girl!!! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Made me misty .... winter's coldness has me feeling this embrace, and its un-escapable silence even. It left me in a hush. ![]() |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
bsquirrel~ I am? thank you for saying that, it is an added smile to my day... ~~ Larry~ woohooooooo.....from my child hood.... ![]() ~~ Noah~ Jazz of Joy....I love that....sweet friend....thank you ~~ SY~ you could hear it too huh?? thanks SY... ![]() ~~ Karen~ its a "moody blues" for me... ![]() thank you for peeking in...I appreciate you....thanks for the double click ~~ Bill~ I'll take you up on that....save a song for me... ~~ Sven~ sometimes it can be a good mood....Thanks ~~ Barry~ tis a great movie, and song....so glad you enjoyed... ~~ Nancy~ so glad you did, thanks for swinging by...HUGSSS ~~ Dave~ thank you much...I keep both you and Tara in my thoughts....I know you are both excited about starting a life together.... ![]() ~~ Larry~ Is that kind of a Blues BUMP with Rhythm???? humble thanks.... ~~ Lori~ LOL I am too tired these days to "keep" up with anything....I love your replies....HUGSSS ~~ Craig~ embracing this reply, with tender thoughts.... ![]() ~~~~~ Love and Peace to all.... thank you for your time.... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into an ocean of you, what if I told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-02-2002 10:41 AM).] |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! [This message has been edited by Interloper (05-03-2002 09:12 AM).] |
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Moonlight Romeo![]() ![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I like that way that this riffs. ![]() Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
beautiful as always... "comfort, your arms, a dream I hold reality desire safe" this was my favorite part. |
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