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A Flutter of Enchantment
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A Flutter of Enchantment |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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A Flutter of Enchantment You came from somewhere far away Where I have never been On paper sails you navigate And ride the mighty wind So silently you tumble down In swirling days of spring A flutter of enchantment found In treasures that you bring In rambling pathways in the air You dance and dart around Flittering from here to there Before you settle down Oh butterfly, what splendors bring The magic of your grace Translucent stained glass golden wings Have found a fragrant place Your colors spread majesticaly And gather in my eyes These wings that crossed a tropic sea And tumbled from the skies And now you light upon a bloom So near that I caress Your golden wings with rapture Of the glory you possess Monarch is the name you’re given Royalty, your place So noble is your strength within So humble is your grace How fortunate my spirit’s fate When you passed through my garden gate Elizabeth Santos May 1, 2002 [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (05-01-2002 04:36 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, As lovely as the butterfly. Your writing is always superb. Sy |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! Ode to a Futterbye  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
a most appropriate write for May Day! I loved the "paper sails" analogy of delicate wing here...this is a joy to behold, as butterflies, always are. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
To th' library with ye! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, I love butterflies so so so much, monarchs and blue morphos are my favorite, though I love them all! (kiss on cheek) May your garden flourish with these flittering beauties always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-01-2002 03:03 PM).] |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
Elizabeth, This is very pretty! I'm gonna send this link to missy, she'll love it! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 I sure wish I was sitting in your family room looking at what you see right about now Liz, I miss the serenity of your yard but will read it through your work, which is like being there. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Liz, this is absolutely gorgeous! 'Tis a keeper indeed Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
let the Spring begin!! wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Elizabeth... you've given enchantment to my morning. *S* |
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