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I dance the twinkling...(repost for Beltane)
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I dance the twinkling...(repost for Beltane) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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silver glove of velvet touch a lady ~ fair ~ a gaze of pond a single taper lessens dark a crescent moon.....a hint of blush. spears of aloe beg to heal horn of plenty......bowl of salt seductive ~ fog ~ a blanket dream fruits of harvest...fruit, surreal... four o clocks in waft perfume a breeze inspired shimmies leaves a water's trickle, giggling, hibiscus--proud, enough to bloom. Papaya plays in silhouette (I feel the ground beneath my feet.) I raise my arms in claim of sky. In awe, I dance the twinkling... *and now I'm off to bed. Big day for me tomorrow!  Have a Blessed Beltane everyone! pssst....GO OUTSIDE for a bit. Plant something. Watch the sun set. Watch the moon rise. and? Don't forget to dance barefoot in the grass!  * |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Serenity, it says this is a repost gosh darnit how I ever let this one get past me I dunno... Anyways, as always ya know I just adore reading your poems... I love the way they always flow so seamlessly especially when I read them out loud in quiet hush in whisper tone... Most of the time that is how I like2read your poetry as each verse written has a sweet rhythm2em .. Hugs2uDearPoetFriend *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (05-01-2002 12:35 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
silver glove of velvet touch a lady ~ fair ~ a gaze of pond a single taper lessens dark a crescent moon.....a hint of blush. ============================= Papaya plays in silhouette (I feel the ground beneath my feet.) I raise my arms in claim of sky. In awe, I dance the twinkling... ================================ gawwwd I love when you candle dance.... and as for dancing barefoot in the grass? I think I'll pass...I got a 100 pound dog here....gives a whole new meaning to "dew/do" on the lawn WAKKA WAKKA   rofl.... goodnight me goddess  ... and I don't know why ... |
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Melodie Morningstarr Junior Member
since 2002-05-09
Posts 16Toronto, ON, Canada |
This is great! You have such a unique presentation and your style has oomph! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Your style reconstructs what oomph is. A nice poem for a night of watching trees through the window and drinking to yrself. Or maybe I'm just depressed right now. Always love yr stuff. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful Karen! Blessed Be. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The Deer never forgets Beltane! |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
Your poem was cutely beautiful! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Is that like what I call, "The Shining Feeling"? You know when you come up over a ridge on a mountain and suddenly you can see for miles down a valley with a beautiful long blue winding river at the bottom. Or were you just twinkling Celeste? Just kidding....much fun this was to read! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Fantastic imagery, Serenity! Cor |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful reading this..glad it came back up so I could..(thanks, Eric) |
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