Open Poetry #20 |
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Grapes of Passion |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869![]() |
5000th Post I savored the bouquet of your lips filling the goblet of my heart dripping with grapes of passion overflowing the brim with a blush of sweet touch and a hint of candlelight cascading sweet wicks of love melting my soul like French pastry upon my tongue filled with bonbon sweet sampling the delicacy of a dream come true but roving tides rushed in and candlelight drifted upon gypsy waves of yesterday "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare) [This message has been edited by Victoria (05-05-2002 03:16 PM).] |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH Vic.....the touch you have in writing of a moment....is simply divine..... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Some of my passionate yesterdays are my best memories... nicely done and congrats on that 5000 hugsss M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
overflowing the brim with a blush of sweet touch and a hint of candlelight cascading sweet wicks of love melting my soul ========================= beautiful imagery and analogy... clever use of metaphor. Congrats on 5000 poetess Victoria!!! ![]() ... and I don't know why ... |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you barry..always nice to here from you hugs maureen...thank you so much hon..hugs janet marie...thank you for peeking in..im glad you enjoyed hugss |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I could use some of those grapes...congratulations on 5000...James |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh Victoria, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! YAY!!! Congratulations on 5000, sweet friend, WE'RE ALL SOOOOOO PROUD OF YOU, THIS IS THE PERFECT POEM TO TOP THIS MILESTONE, YOUR CONTRIBUTIONS TO THIS SITE ARE ALWAYS ENCHANTING!!! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much, may love always taste sweet like a French pastry to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-05-2002 03:58 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
![]() ![]() And a beautiful poem it is I might add! Here's to many many thousand more! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
melting my soul like French pastry upon my tongue Wonderful !! Congrats on your 5000th post Victoria !! Well done. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Victoria darling girl what an utterly absolutely beautiful piece of writing this is darling heart it’s exquisite. This is utterly utterly lovely, the perfect piece to brighten my eyes this. I love this whole poem as always it is utterly wonderful. As soft as a baby’s sigh, wonderful writing 5 0 0 0 well done Victoria Absolutely superb writing, I love it utterly ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
james...thank you but i think you have had your share for a while haa... noah..thank you for your lovely responses.. always nice hearing from you ![]() a delicious French pastry in Manatoo Springs..and it inspired that line... ![]() Chris..thank you Chris..i cant believe i am at 5000...but i am..ha..thanks for peeking in hugs marsha..thank you so much...WOW im glad you enjoyed..a lovely response from you as always..hugss |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, Vic, 5000! Time flies here doesn't it? I love this, and especially the last few lines. Sandra |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Sandra..hugss..yes it certainly does fly doesnt it ha.. |
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