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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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perfect aim you said as my eyes touched you there between your caution and your willing just below your defenses and just above the suggestions you whispered perfect aim I said the way you put your target there in front so close to my shaking arrow ©Dark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you are just too much sometimes....*s M p.s. how you get away with these in open surprises me...must be me using my imagination too strongly [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-30-2002 05:27 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nt...whatever were you imagining ms? not my image of cupid with his arrow poised to strike a lover's heart? thank you naughty one |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can understand Maureen's confusion when this is not February and sometimes thoughts of Cupid are fleeting... well done Sir...some great imagery! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am never confused, Karilea...that made me laugh this morning ..*winkin to the both of you... M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine, good morning ms, thank you for your visit..I enjoy you. Guess I am the confused one...didn't know cupid was only a once a year fellow...darn it I must try to remember that...thank you again |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Clever, Enjoyed the read |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Straight on with that Quiver..of arrows.. I think Cupid could retire with you in succession of the bow? hehe Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sy, humble thanks sir, glad you enjoyed it Regina, hold this apple for me? oh that was Robin Tell and his forty thieves huh...a rose perhaps and a bow..thanks babe for your smile by |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You aimed your clever, right into the heart of a great metaphor. Enjoyed! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect aim you said as my eyes touched you there between your caution and your willing ================================ me thinks once you take aim...you dont miss a thing Poetically speaking of course  get away with what in open? very clever poetry that makes one read between the lines and then make up their own minds? Yeah...that must be it ... and I don't know why ... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Martie, thank you sweet lady for your eyes and words. Janet Marie, thank you for the touches..and yes I would try to hit my target (well nudge gently) |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I love it!!! Very cleverly written. Patience is the ability to idle your motor, when you feel like stripping your gears. Author Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
PhaChi friend, thank you for the touch talk I appreciate you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Probably one of the most clever pieces I have ever read! Well done! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
interloper...humble thanks my friend.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cupid, please hear our cry, And let your arrow fly...... *sighs here* from Enchantress and the visiting Nightshade. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Enchanting and Nightshade, thank you both for your sighs and replies bless you with grand days and whisper nights |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) YAY!!! The golden bow of the cupid and the magic it conjures shine sin this lovely vision, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugsssssssss) May the arrows of love always permeate your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Great one, Dark. ((Dark)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Magical word play and creative interpretation - you never cease to amaze. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Perfect marksmanship ... this hit the spot! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I'm beginning to see it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thanks my friend silver, you are a gent, thank you kim, thank you nice lady for your touches janette, wink, thanks ms you are a treat duncan, thanks for the read and re, I appreciate you |
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