Open Poetry #20 |
The Mystery of Life |
Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
The Mystery of Life ~~~*by Muys*~~~ Every day I think about the mystery of life. I see my Dad, I see my Mom, on pictures near my bed. My friends are falling like the trees, I loose them one by one. The undertaker I know well, I see him every time, when I attend the funerals of friends I mentioned in this rhyme. I say: "Hello, I'm here again", he says: "You should be glad", But the only things that will be left, are the pictures near my bed. And then there are the memories of two I hold so dear, the man who loved me all his life, the little girl I've lost. My heart is fluttering all around when I think of those two. The mystery of life I guess, will always play it's peek-a-booh. ~~~~~~***~~~~~~ Life on the internet begins at...90! [This message has been edited by Muys (04-30-2002 05:38 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the middle word in LIFE is IF. I like this poem, the last line set it off well |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a wonderful write...one thing is for sure as we grow older the losses seem greater ...but the memories remain forever. M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...none of us know exactly how long we have...hopefully we will enjoy some special experiences and memories...James |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Thank you friends for your reply. Muys Life on the internet begins at...90! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thanks for the thoughts you spark in my mind |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, this touched my heart deeply reading this knowing how special you are to us all and that I know your husband and your daughter will always love you so so much and will never forget you, for you are a true angel to them! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooo beautifully written, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Muys, thank yuou for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ohh, yes and i do hope i am an adept player of the peek-a-boo game...i won't want LIFE to win every single time |
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Casanova Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 48Mays Landing NJ |
Muys,A Very heartfelt write, I can't say I know how you feel. I just hope Life will bring you only good, from here on. thanks for posting this. have a great day!. -Cas [This message has been edited by Casanova (05-01-2002 02:05 AM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. I enjoyed reading it. |
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