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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-04-29 10:03 PM


You saw the pain behind my smile
And saw the sadness in my eyes
You felt the aching in my heart
As you held me while I cried

But on the day you came my way
All my tears began to dry
You gave my life new meaning
And you gave me wings to fly

The pain had soon dispersed
And my smile had now returned
Your love taught me many lessons
From you so much I learned

You gave me rays of hope
And a rainbow of every color
As you introduced me to your love
Affording me feelings like no other

You removed the cobwebs from my heart
As your love moved in to stay
My life improved tenfold
With all the love you brought my way

My old life is a fading memory
As I finally close its door
My soul embraces this new life
I now share with the man I adore

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-29 10:07 PM


And as long as you both give as much love
as you are...to the other...your lives
will be blessed till eternity comes and
takes you...into eternity...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-29 10:08 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, somehow all your wonderful words always touch a piece of my heart that makes me cry and smile so easily, I am so happy for you and the new joy you've found, for you deserve it so much and you fill me with hope that maybe someday soon I can meet my dream girl Joanna and find a love in her that can end this sadness in my heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Larry C
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3 posted 2002-04-30 12:12 PM


Sue,
Just a totally awesome write. I saw things change right before my eyes.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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4 posted 2002-04-30 12:31 PM


Sue,

   Oh I wish I would have thought of this lol.  It fits so perfectly for Dave and I.  I really like this

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Casanova
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5 posted 2002-04-30 12:38 PM


Suetang, this Is an AWSOME write, I loved it, It ahs a Very good flow, Please don't stop writing, I can't wait to see more..
And Enjoy your new life, may love only bring the best! -Cas

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6 posted 2002-05-01 09:38 AM


1derful write indeed.
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