Open Poetry #20 |
You Gave Me New Life |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
You saw the pain behind my smile And saw the sadness in my eyes You felt the aching in my heart As you held me while I cried But on the day you came my way All my tears began to dry You gave my life new meaning And you gave me wings to fly The pain had soon dispersed And my smile had now returned Your love taught me many lessons From you so much I learned You gave me rays of hope And a rainbow of every color As you introduced me to your love Affording me feelings like no other You removed the cobwebs from my heart As your love moved in to stay My life improved tenfold With all the love you brought my way My old life is a fading memory As I finally close its door My soul embraces this new life I now share with the man I adore Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And as long as you both give as much love as you are...to the other...your lives will be blessed till eternity comes and takes you...into eternity... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, somehow all your wonderful words always touch a piece of my heart that makes me cry and smile so easily, I am so happy for you and the new joy you've found, for you deserve it so much and you fill me with hope that maybe someday soon I can meet my dream girl Joanna and find a love in her that can end this sadness in my heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Just a totally awesome write. I saw things change right before my eyes. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sue, Oh I wish I would have thought of this lol. It fits so perfectly for Dave and I. I really like this Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Casanova Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 48Mays Landing NJ |
Suetang, this Is an AWSOME write, I loved it, It ahs a Very good flow, Please don't stop writing, I can't wait to see more.. And Enjoy your new life, may love only bring the best! -Cas |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful write indeed. |
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