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Midnight's Curl
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Midnight's Curl |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Midnight's Curl ~*Marge Tindal*~  Once upon a midnight's curl came metamorphosis of this girl Quilted in coverlet of golden adorn of the Cinderella-hour 'ere she was born~ Struggle of wing to be set free To flutter the night in ecstasy Cocooned no more in cozy wrap Bursting free ~ Wings in flap~ Tinkling glass of unslippered feet she made her way in swift retreat Clock-in-strike of strokes-in-chime away she runs cloaked in rhyme~ Boing ..... boing .... boing ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge,  ... ... ...boing...boing...boingI guess it ain't about spooning!  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very uniqe write Marge, lovely and enjoyable read, floria Floria |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Larry~ You got that right !  Floria~ Awwwww, thanks hon~ Hope you're feeling much better~  *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You have a mind ful of fantasies and I love every one.  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahh Marge, you caught me in the midst of my pedigreeing and it was a welcome refreshing break in this energietaken work. It seems you always know when I need a break. Boing Boing Boing Thank you sweet lady HUGS, Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is as always utterly utterly beautiful, you have such a wondrous way of writing, and so much talent. Isn't it a good thing you are also a wonderful person otherwise I might be green with envy. However you are fabulous and I'm not envious. I'm just so amazed and awed by the skill you have to produce these utterly fabulous pieces time after time. Absolutely fabulous writing  Love and warm stuff as always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge You have so beautifully demonstrated one of the wonders of nature and life...loved it! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is sheer magic! I love it! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Love the bit about tinkling glass. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Marge,I am delirious with this poem. Wow, love it. You are magic. Sandra |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A lovely poem Marge and the image you placed with your precious poem was icing on the cake... A treat of a read4me dearPoetFriend... Thank you... *~coco~* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Thank you sweetie~ I'd have to be the first to admit that I have no idea where it came from .. but, I'm glad it came~ Titia~ Oh ... so pleased to give you a poetic break ~ Love you dear lady~ MarshaLove~ Awwww, you've got nothing to be green over .. You lovely poetess you ! Thanks sweets~ Martie~ Thank you for seeing ~ BettyLou~ Shucks, it just came in to sit a spell and trolloped through my little inkwell~ BSquirrel~ THANK YOU !!!! CatalinaMoon~ Thanks so much~ Funny thing ... driving home today, I mind-wrote 7 poems ... and as I sat down to the computer to pen them .. this one showed up, demanding to be first in line ! CoCoBaci~ Thanks, love~ I found that lovely graphic surfing the Internet a long time ago ... guess it got tired of being cooped up in my files~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (04-29-2002 09:42 PM).] |
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