Open Poetry #20 |
One sweet loaf of bread - inspired by Marsha's poem, "Two souls in one" |
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
One sweet loaf of bread - inspired by Marsha's poem, "Two souls in one" "How beautiful you are and how pleasing, O love, with your delights!" NIV Song of Solomon 7:6 I awaken in morning, a new day O so bright Sunshine flowing through my window in pretty glow And there you are beside me an angel in white Glowing radiant beauty, breathing very slow. Body, so beautiful as you lie next to me Eyes beaming bright a loving sight you are so pure I love you so your beauty glows, so tenderly Two spirits dine; sweet lovers shine in God's allure. And yet I know you're far away across the sea This glow so fair comes through the air in blowing wind Our heart's reside inside a chosen frequency Two souls, one spirit, fly together with no end. I close my eyes; I feel your sweet lips kissing me I touch your face as we embrace in loving touch Our hearts beat strong although I'm gone away from thee All heaven glows as each star knows of our love, such. Bright loving power as our starlight, lightens heaven Two souls in one sweet loaf of bread, raising leaven. Two souls, one spirit making one sweet loaf of bread. One sweet loaf of bread for God. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Springs, Florida April 29, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Enjoyed. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy as always your writing portrays such depth and by far outstrips the scribble that inspired you to write this utter beauty. This is absolutely a magnificent piece from you, the power of the words and the metaphors are exquisite. Truly outstanding writing. You excel at this type of character picture painting, truly excellent writing Utterly utterly superb darling heart well done As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
And what a loaf of bread that must be Newell. Great poem, floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you bsquirrel. ((bsquirrel)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you Marsha, darling heart. ((marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, floria. Yes, Marsha inspires me to bake a lot, LOL... ((floria)) -newll Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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