Open Poetry #20 |
The worth of one candle (response to VAS,s challenge) |
paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
One candle Oasis of hope In the dark paladin [This message has been edited by paladin (04-30-2002 08:18 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Paladin, An awesome 20 or less! Well done... It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooo. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, this is a fabulous ten or less poem, may this candle always light up your hearts in times of great need! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this is a 3-5-3 syllable count..so i guess this is a haiku..if so, Kudos to you...i write those 5-7-5 haikus rather often but i haven't been able to write a satisfactory 3-5-3 haiku.. Nicely done! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful, powerful image. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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