Open Poetry #20 |
Hold On (Tonight) (3000th post) |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I will hold on (tonight) Tonight Is a day To shine my dreams away Hold on (tonight) Don't wanna to cry anymore, Don't wanna to let My pain come again, Let the sun come, To my life, I have been holding On to dreams The dreams I have had, I have seen so many things In my life, So don't want to lose a thing I have seen so many things In my life So don't want to lose a thing That have been dreaming Hold on (tonight) Let my tears wash away Because I have been holding on (to long) Everything Everything right(tonight) I will make everything right (Tonight) Hold on (tonight) [This message has been edited by vandana (04-29-2002 12:14 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WOOOOHOOOOO 3000 Way to go Vandana~ C O N G R A T S!! Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I was watching, Vandana, and I knew your 3000th post would be very, very special, and it is! Congratulations! I hope things are going much better for you... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Enjoyed~ Congratulations ... I remember your very first post here~ You have grown so in your writing~ Lovely dear~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Vandana, Excellent write and a fine way to celebrate 3,000 posts! Wooohooo!!! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . . I've enjoyed your work ever since I came here. . . it beats with your heart, which makes it wonderful. . . congratulations. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Congratulations on #3000 and your best to date, I believe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Let the sun come, To my life, I hope it does everyday for you hugs M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! OH VANDANA, WE ARE ALL SOOOOOO PROUD OF YOU, I LOVE THIS!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) CONGRATULATIONS ON 3000, SWEET FRIEND, THIS IS THE PERFECT POEM TO TOP IT ALL UP!!! (smiles) Your words always delight all our days, sweet friend, God Bless You, your wonderful words grow each day, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful way to mark your milestone. *S* This is lovely, vandana... Congratulations! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Vandana darling girl, as always you write with such skill and beauty I found this excellent poem wonderful. Exquisite writing, the flow and the rhyme are utterly utterly spectacular This poem contains some amazingly beautiful lines, the form is utterly utterly divine, and I love it I truly do. 3, 0 0 0 well done Utterly utterly utterly perfect Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (04-29-2002 05:23 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice vandana...congratulations on 3000 writes...James |
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