Open Poetry #20 |
Waiting For You |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
As I sit here thinking about the days gone by I remember all the love we shared so long ago Right next to each other we use to always ly As our love for each other we continued to show We would sit underneath a tree looking at the sky Looking at all of the flowers as they started to grow All the things you use to say they were always nice Now it seems as if your heart is starting to get cold I wonder if you will ever love me like you did then There is no doubt in my mind my love for you is true Just like it was on that first day when our life did begin Each time we were together our love for each other grew I wait each day for you to come back to me To give me the love you gave that was so sweet By Sue 4-27-02 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) This is such a breathtaking sonnet, sweet friend, I wish this love to always come true for you and sing to your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Casanova Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 48Mays Landing NJ |
I enjoyed this, A very good read. And it flows very nicely. And Don't every give up on love, it is worth waiting for. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, A nice write and love is a wonderful thing for sure. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wish upon a star. If love be true, it may return from afar. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sue, beautiful write, from your heart.. thank you so much for sharing...true love is always worth waiting for. please just hold on. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoyed your words, I no longer wait for a return..it could never be the same. *s M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuzieQ~ You've written this bittersweet ache in such a lovely manner~ Wishing you all the best that love can bring~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
An achingly good sonnet |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sue - you bring back a lot of memories with this... BC |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Beautiful and sad. |
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