Open Poetry #20 |
A Box Of Letters |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A box of letters in a drawer from two hearts with darkened tear ink Written words penned of a lover on moonlit nights as stars did sink Folded pages lying in there telling of a time of romance words of rhyme two lovers did share from heart to heart and one more chance A smudge or two upon the lines from tears of remember from then making two hearts ‘gain softly pine to have it all just once again. A sigh and sob so soft from lip as eyes reflect the view of past The words that flowed as two hearts skip read once again, to always last. Moments in memory of a time when words flowed in flames of passion Two souls romance written in rhyme A box of words in rhyme's fashion now tucked away... eternally not forgotten [This message has been edited by Magnus (04-28-2002 10:15 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Barry, this is beautiful, so touching, almost makes me want to cry. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) A keepsake of loves memories...this is wonderful, sweet friend, I know this kind of feeling so well now, for since Octover when I first knew of Joanna, we have sent each other letters and I alwats keep those that she sends me and I want to treasure them forever! (big hugggsssss) This is sooooo wonderfully captivating, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Magnus, It seems you know a little about their content...hmmm. Nicely done. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank You Sandra...glad you, sniff, sniff, enjoyed this... YEP Noah, such a treasure that can be... Larry C. Of course I do...whatever my dreams and imagination want them to contain.... Thanx... |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Brings back memorys of love letters and a picture in a plastic bag.I kept them in a pocket of my fatiques over my heart. paladin |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Your words were so beautiful and so very moving. They reminded me of a favourite movie of mine "The Bridges Of Madison County". I never tire of reading your magnificent words of love. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now don't you know it's me who's smiling at this tender bit... thank you! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Bet you didn't know you'd pegged me with this one~ I have every personal letter that I've ever received, every post card, every greeting card ... to part with one of them would be to tear off a little corner of my heart~ How treasured they've become through the years~ Thank you for this beautifully penned drift through nostalgia~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Magnus, such sweet memories this brings back. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry~Double *sighs* coming out of Canada tonight.... Nightshade who is visiting here also swooned at this one.... *We believe all love letters should be White Shoulders scented* |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
A smudge or two upon the lines from tears of remember from then making two hearts ‘gain softly pine to have it all just once again.'' I have so many tucked away....so many with tears that stain pages.... ohhh Barry~ this is so touching, and so haunting....hugsss Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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