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the 5 cent box
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the 5 cent box |
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staybellmined Junior Member
since 2001-07-29
Posts 21insanity, usa (killeen,tx) |
welcome to the 5 cent box the box where all my things do dwell in a realm where no one can tell welcome to the 5 cent box mixed ideas and hidden agendas good intentions and half formed thoughts all packed in one little space discounted and priced to move everything in the box for 5 cents take it all or take nothing it's up to you to decide I can't force you to be happy though if I could I'd do it if only the guilt would be bearable but it isn't, I should know I feel guilty when I tell you no whether I'm wrong or right it doesn't matter so let me sell the things I just don't need the things that make us bruise and bleed a little bit of pride a dab of stubbornness and a pinch of sanity all placed in the 5 cent box it's better than a set of building blocks so come one come all have a steal before it's gone it's everything to some and something to everyone welcome to the 5 cent box if it bleeds seven days and doesn't die, then it's something you should be happy to get. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most interesting and provocative piece...you made me read it three times... thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very interesting...I like the concept of this |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Wow, I love the creative thoughts behind these words, sweet friend, I think every now and then we do feel we need to tidy ourselves up a bit so we sell our deceits and odd-ends like some flea market and just want others not to see the value in them! (big hugggssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
please do go round again! Love this one too much, forgive. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting read. Let's have more  |
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