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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-04-28 08:00 AM

Fostering Déjà's View

across the plains of planes
thoughts roaming, fast as trains
to come onto a whistle’s stop
for a memory they would drop

and you experience déjà vu

walk into a grand old home
know the corridors which to roam
reach around a wall, touch a light
switch it on, candelabra bright

and you experience déjà vu

look into an old man’s eyes
where the pale blue may realize
he’s looked at you in the past
when your future was first cast

and you experience déjà vu

hear the voices on the wind
think of grandparents once again
in the light see visions long gone
as you step forth, forward and on

and you experience déjà vu

when you look into a mirror
seeing not you, but someone dearer
in that moment, it’s quite clear
the me you see is very near

experiencing déjà vu

when I hear your I love you
and I experience the things you do
even though we’ve never met
for I’m not born, not just yet

experience déjà vu

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01.25.01

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-04-28 08:16 AM

Sunhine,
Exceptional write, excellent.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-04-28 09:28 AM

Oh Karilea!
Now this morning read gave me goose bumps.
I really enjoyed this, for my own personal reasons.
Reminds me of one of the sig lines I use.
*I've loved you forever in lifetimes before*
Wonderful thoughts here and you KNOW I love it.
~Hugs~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-04-28 09:44 AM

Kari darling heart sister, as always you write with such skill and beauty I found this excellent poem wonderful. Exquisite writing, the flow and the rhyme are utterly utterly spectacular This poem contains some amazingly beautiful lines, the form is utterly utterly divine, and I love it I truly do.

Oh how I wish I could write like this, this is seriously good. Now did you just experience déjà vu?

Utterly utterly utterly perfect

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-04-28 10:46 AM

Oh Karilea, I love this so so so much, Deja Vu what a wonderful subject and you do it so well.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-04-28 05:16 PM

"when I hear your I love you
and I experience the things you do
even though we’ve never met
for I’m not born, not just yet

experience déjà vu"

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love how you describe such supernatural emotions and phenomenons, sweet friend, I know this feeling of deja vu well, especially when I dream of my Joanna! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-28-2002 05:16 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-04-28 06:18 PM

Deja Vu is so fascinating, Karilea...
and you have done a terrific job writing about it...
I really loved this poem.

~hugs from afar

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2002-04-29 05:54 AM

deja is a place in many minds sunshine
seems to be the wide spot of remember
just off the highway to forgotten

enjoyed it lady

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2002-04-29 07:56 PM

Karilea,
It seems I should go through your old files. I just love these reposts. I have a theory on Deja vu's. A thought that goes straight past short term memory and is immediately recalled as a long term experience! But then again...I believe Freud was a fraud.

Fabulous write and another keeper.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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