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So Into You
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So Into You |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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So Into You The skies are closing in as raindrops begin their fall your reflection in my mind plays gently capturing all the moments of your kisses as you stroke the side of cheek the skies are closing in tonight and I am feeling meek Your picture leans before me your eyes of gentle hue a hint of smile is captured by my thoughts of wanting you the secrecy that you hold back reaches past the words this time may be the last time my needs for you are heard I wonder, will there ever be the understanding rhyme of once upons and days to come remembrances in time can lips of yours impress upon the lips of mine to feel tomorrow is the yesterday when loving you was real My emotions, they are always mixed often in pursuit to touch upon the inner core of one who's so astute whose intellect draws me into his arms that gently mold a disposition wanting more life's treasures to behold The skies are closing in tonight I feel the dampness grow in harmony of memories my mind in overflow of thoughts, as I sit watching eyes your stare intent, their blue expressing wordless, wonderings my eyes so into you M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
nakdthoughts, I am so into this poem I read it three times before I could find words to respond. This is so romantic and soft, so loving and lovely. A masterpiece of love. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
nakdthoughts, I am so into this poem I read it three times before I could find words to respond. This is so romantic and soft, so loving and lovely. A masterpiece of love. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you always find yourself lost in his eyes and in loves beauty forever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You really have a way with words! I always look forward to reading you. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M.... This is beautiful and the flow/cadence is extremely good. Beyond a doubt.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A wonderful write, looking into and out of love. Hugs! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
My emotions, they are always mixed often in pursuit Loved that line!!! You'll get there yet dear girl!! Maureen, you put your poetry together so well and make it look easy!! This made me miss my muse something fierce.... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I wonder, will there ever be the understanding rhyme of once upons and days to come remembrances in time Beautiful job on this one, Maureen...I can't wait to get back here full time...  ~loads of hugsLyra |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
*Sighs* ... This got me right into the mood for love ... A delightful read ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
M, you lucky lady! (or should I say lucky man he is?) It sounds like you are on your way to finding happiness that you so greatly deserve...I am happy for you that you are able to write like this! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kethry, I am glad you enjoyed my words, for awhile there I thought I was too empty inside to create anything of worth. hugss and double thanks *s M Noah, romantic me, thanks romantic and sweet you *s M ThisDiamond, I am always glad to see your responses. They are greatly appreciated *s M Barry, I am always beyond a doubt *w thanks for your kind comments. Thank You Martie, whenever you stop to respond, I know I have touched deeper. hugsss M |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
M, this was just a huge sigh waiting to happen so....*sighs*...very beautiful write my friend...your love shines brightly in this, sprinkled with magic. every line flowed beautifully into the next...i am loving this...take care. amy "you can't stop |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen, I like this soooo much. "I wonder, will there ever be the understanding rhyme of once upons and days to come remembrances in time can lips of yours impress upon the lips of mine to feel tomorrow is the yesterday when loving you was real" Oh, how I know this, and feel it every day. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lori...some lines that run through my head even surprise me when I reread something I wrote *s I think there is another Me inside. hugss M |
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