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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-04-27 06:37 PM


Our passion fuels the fire
As we scale love's highest peak
More loving beside the firelight
From you is what I now seek

Your touch always feels electric
As we meld and fuse as one
The lovers in my past are many
But you are the ultimate one

Feelings stir from deep within
As you so easily light my fire
Temperatures are steadily rising
As you sense my burning desire

Like a moth to a flame
I am drawn to your love
As the candlelight now flickers
Images dance on the ceiling above

The sensual sweet softness
Of your lips taste so divine
Sweat glistens on your body
And your eyes seductively shine

Two souls have found life partners
Two hearts now beat as one
In love's embrace from now 'til morning
Love grows in harmony with the rising sun

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-04-27 06:40 PM


Sue,
Sounds like an all nighter! You go girl...

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-27 06:42 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may you and your true loves hearts forever melt together and may you always be embraced forever in happiness and fueled to eternity! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Suetang
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3 posted 2002-04-27 06:42 PM


Hey Larry

I can see you're back with a vengeance so I'd better behave!!

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Marsha
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4 posted 2002-04-27 07:02 PM


Sue darling girl oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? Beautiful writing, absolutely beautiful
Do you have to really write this well darling girl? Hmmm? Is it fair o be such a good writer when I can’t manage to fly anywhere near this high. I forgive you because this is utterly utterly perfect. Your heart is really aglow with pure love in this, I’m so delighted for you


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Magnus
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5 posted 2002-04-27 07:08 PM


All night what?  Geritol Marathon...oooops,
that was for me...not you....

Like this...lots of love and passion warming
the page.....paper starting to crinkle from
the heat...

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-04-27 07:12 PM


Nice sue, a lot of love in this piece, glad for you that you are so happy in love. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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