Open Poetry #20 |
Fueled By Passion |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Our passion fuels the fire As we scale love's highest peak More loving beside the firelight From you is what I now seek Your touch always feels electric As we meld and fuse as one The lovers in my past are many But you are the ultimate one Feelings stir from deep within As you so easily light my fire Temperatures are steadily rising As you sense my burning desire Like a moth to a flame I am drawn to your love As the candlelight now flickers Images dance on the ceiling above The sensual sweet softness Of your lips taste so divine Sweat glistens on your body And your eyes seductively shine Two souls have found life partners Two hearts now beat as one In love's embrace from now 'til morning Love grows in harmony with the rising sun Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Sounds like an all nighter! You go girl... It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may you and your true loves hearts forever melt together and may you always be embraced forever in happiness and fueled to eternity! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hey Larry I can see you're back with a vengeance so I'd better behave!! Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? Beautiful writing, absolutely beautiful Do you have to really write this well darling girl? Hmmm? Is it fair o be such a good writer when I can’t manage to fly anywhere near this high. I forgive you because this is utterly utterly perfect. Your heart is really aglow with pure love in this, I’m so delighted for you Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
All night what? Geritol Marathon...oooops, that was for me...not you.... Like this...lots of love and passion warming the page.....paper starting to crinkle from the heat... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Nice sue, a lot of love in this piece, glad for you that you are so happy in love. floria Floria |
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