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Gentle Grace
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Gentle Grace When daylight comes with gentle grace Its light caressing ‘ore your face I follow its path with softest trace Then feel my heart begin to race This shows that I love you The sun will touch your face with light And chase away the dark of night I’ll take you on a magic flight Bath your soul in pure delight I’ll prove that I love you When moonbeams brush across your skin It stirs the fires deep within The blush of heat stains my skin Where love and joy enter in I’ll reveal my love for you The touch of breeze across your lips The gentle swaying of your hips I trace you with my fingertips I’ll taste your soul in tiny sips I know my love is true Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It is nice to be in love and to have the ability and desire to let the love grow...James |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Just another beautiful one Marsha, "The sun will touch your face with light And chase away the dark of night" Just lovely words. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, you are a true romantic, sweet friend, I love the momorhyme scheme you had in the stanzas plus the singular same-rhyke scheme at the end of every stanza, this is gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) may loves gentle grace forever permeate your heart and dreams, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Marsha, Marsha, Give me a moment to recover. The essence of this discover Love you too. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ This is absolutely beautiful~ *HUGS* to you for the sweet poetic heart you share~ Love ya'  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh WOW!!! Marsha~ This is so tender and soft, so delightful and warm, a beautiful tender write sweet poetess, well done~ ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha my love foreswear the moon don't you rise too far too soon Romance it seems becomes you true with passion spent in heart of you this lovely piece writ with your love draws the magic from above calls the angels to draw near to sit in silence, your words hear and as for me, I'm lost anew amazed at the gift that springs from you. *Hugs* Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marsha Grace "From the fullness of his grace we have all received one blessing after another." NIV John 1:16 Moonlight on a summer eve glows your name And I am captured by twinkling moonbeams Rolling along a perfect star lit frame Shining, saying I am Love, you're my dreams How I vaporize as I realize God made you Angel of my soul! Honey! Morning dew God has made The Throne O, so beautiful Raising rainbow levels when making you And I know ev'ry star twinkles lighting full Cause God desires to show all Glory, true. Everything about You makes me Love You. Marsha Grace. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida April 27, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marsha Grace...this is perfectly beautiful! Love it..love it...just love it! Especially the last stanza. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy... You really are getting awfully good at this! Utterly utterly so utterly good.... YES you are! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
passionate and soothing..read my venus poem..looks like we're on common ground this evening |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, Romance...it makes the world go 'round. As do you my friend. Nice poem. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do you have any idea how pretty this is, read aloud, but quietly? Like a little prayer, my dear, a little soft prayer... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sis, such warm gentle grace flies from your pen straight from your heart...and i agree, read aloud this sounds so pretty... as always your words leave me in awe, your talent leaves me with all smiles! love and romance look good on you my friend...and we are very lucky to witness this miracle, your writing! take care. love you. amy "you can't stop |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
When daylight comes with gentle grace Its light caressing ‘ore your face I love the romance in this one, Marsha... So very well done... I've missed being here so much... I'm back for today,for a couple of hours anyway....don't know if I can handle more than that.... but I am going to try to be here as often as possible. Its hard during the week because we are always running back and forth to Ann Arbor...but I only have 1 more week of this and then a couple of weeks of intense recovery. ~loads of warm hugs~Lyra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - you're so warm and caring. Love you for it... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lovely as only you can do.. hugss M |
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