Open Poetry #20 |
Bird themes |
paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Humming bird Blur of color Hovering above the vine Busy little thing Sparrow Wee small fellow So cocky for his tiny size He killed cock robin Mocking bird Sitting on a fence Loudly telling the whole world This is all my land Crow Black shadows in the field Eating up the farmer's corn Cawing with delight Snow goose Long distance flyer "V" shaped strands high in the sky Hear their lonly calls Eagle Majestic soarer Above the highest mountain Symbol of our land paladin [This message has been edited by paladin (04-27-2002 02:00 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! I love birds, sweet friend, you have depicted the nature and behavior of all these wonderful species so wonderfully! (big hugggsssssss) This nis delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-27-2002 01:55 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Bob! You know how I have waited for more in your 'theme' series. I love these...extremely well done.... But now stuck in my head is.... "Who killed cock robin? I said the sparrow With my bow and arrow" LOL...you brought back memories with this one! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for these...lovely sights, all.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Enjoyed your birds! "Grab a pen, grab some paper, do yourself a little favor." e |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
how I love our fine feathered friends...but then again...I did name our dear departed Doberman.."Goose"...honestly!! I enjoyed this one. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Paladin, so good to see your name here, and ya know, I absolutely love birds, any shape, any color, any size, any attitude. Yes, I even love those seagulls and pigeons that crap on you when you feed them. My soul cannot live without birds. And I especially love those little tiny hum-birdies. Thanks for sharing this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paladin~ Ohhhhhhh, these are beautiful ! What a pleasant treat for this bird lover~ Thank you soooooooooooo much~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Hey, Paladin, I like 'em. That makes me want to give them a try. Senyrus aren't they? I didn't count the syllables, just enjoyed the read. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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