Open Poetry #20 |
Seeds To Fruition |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Seeds To Fruition Each day awakens Page white and new Should I write for me Shall I write for you Do you read my lips Or imagine my face The emotional being Emerging this space Gypsy in the woods Dancing tree to tree Surrounds of ocean Mermaid of the sea At the early stages What shall be seen Am I young or old Or there inbetween The seed to fruition Takes time to grow Words upon pages Are like an embryo Breaking out a shell Imagining or reality Reading of thoughts Do you envisage me Hope |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
HopeS~ this is delightful, very visual and a very lovely read. Enjoyed very much ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks for your kind reply Tracie Yes I thought while jotted down notes , poems are like seeds the mind plants then hopes to grow Hope |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yes, yes, poems are like seeds, and may we always nurture them dearly to our hearts and let our heart speak and help them sprout into a masterpiece from the ultimate poet! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hope....I do agree....seeds planted, waiting for them to grow...You have done this well, and now it is time to sprinkle a little water and love on them.. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I love this! I also noticed the last verse is an acrostic...BIRD. Maybe just a subconcious Freudian slip, but maybe not. Either way a beautiful piece. |
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