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Feather in Air
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Feather in Air |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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***this is to a special friend*** Feather In Air You've gone a million miles from here Or so it feels, as I shed this lonely tear Your love was so gentle like a feather in the air When I fall, will you promise to be there? I guess I should be moving on now Just seems I can't catch a breeze somehow My heart just loves you so very much I miss the magic of your loving touch What price do we pay though, when fantasy overtakes the real When inner strength no longer serves to help and heal? Do you feel the pain I feel, the tears that I shed These problems must be solved, if we are ever to be wed Tonight I rediscovered some things about me Like a feather in the air, I held on tenderly I traced the picture of you Wondering where we go now what do we do? Then something happened, on this silent night I closed my eyes, greeted by the brightest light The eyes of an Angel looked into mine Oh the sweetness of it all was divine So now I'm not so weary, I am here to try again Broken spirit restored by a special friend The tears that have tracked down my face Like a feather, are my saving grace "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (04-07-2002 08:40 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wonderful Amy~ Enjoyed the whispy feel to this. I hope you catch the breeze and take off with it!! Happy Sunday to you~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Then something happened, on this silent night I closed my eyes, greeted by the brightest light The eyes of an Angel looked into mine Oh the sweetness of it all was divine"  (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this one made me cry because I am so happy you find peace every time you think of this wonderful friend of yours, just as I know like you this person must be atrue angel! (kiss on cheek) May the love this special person offers you always caress your heart like a feather and make you feel special and remind you how special you are! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sensitive and gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"What price do we pay though, when fantasy overtakes the real When inner strength no longer serves to help and heal?" There is much depth and pondering in this piece Amy ... I loved the feeling of inspiration and hope that you've captured in the end. Much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart this was as usual for you utterly utterly wonderful. Do you know how utterly beautiful this poem is? The style is pure you, breathtakingly lovely and the execution is without doubt one of your finest ever. If I were to enthuse all day and all night I still wouldn’t be able to describe how magnificent and what a truly outstanding piece of writing this is. YOU KNOW I LOVE IT this is absolutely exquisite writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Aimster...So VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I just loved the imagery of the feather...one of my favorites in poetry. ***Ivy Rose |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So now I'm not so weary, I am here to try again Broken spirit restored by a special friend The tears that have tracked down my face Like a feather, are my saving grace ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is a beautiful write Amy! So full of emotion and I do love the hopeful ending. Enjoyed. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!! Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aimster, Well done I enjoyed the read. |
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